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With the rise e book comes the declin in paper books same people see this as a food step forward while others do not

With the rise e book comes the declin in paper books same people see this as a food step forward while others do not 6NnRx
there is a decline in e-book and paper books, some people see it as a step forward, while others don’t. I don't agree at all with the declining number of paper books, because reading a paper book is better than a good e-book for health. Many people think that by the 21st century, paper books will not be needed at all, but this He proved that he was a liar, that he was not always careful to read paper books, that he copied more e-books on modern devices, and that he liked to collect and draw books in many libraries. but on the other hand Not to mention that e-books are bad for our fall, they are much easier to read, and there is no need to spend extra money to buy a book. We can get any book we want on the Internet, of course, if they do not have money on social networks. In short, both e-books and paper books are important, but paper books never lose their importance.
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this He proved that he was a liar, that he was not always careful to read paper
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, that he copied more e-books on modern devices, and that he liked to collect and draw
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for our fall, they are much easier to read, and there is no need to spend extra money to
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. We can
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we want on the Internet,
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are
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IELTS essay With the rise e book comes the declin in paper books same people see this as a food step forward while others do not

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
171 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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