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Which is better: to have children earlier or later in a woman’s life? What are possible reasons and effects of these two tendencies on a personal scale and for society in general? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Which is better: to have children earlier or later in a woman’s life? What are possible reasons and effects of these two tendencies on a personal scale and for society in general? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples. 25nYo
Nowadays, many women raise question about having children earlier or later in their lives. This essay will elaborate on most possible reasons and effects of these two trends on a personal scale and for society in general. One of the biggest reasons that encourage women to have a child earlier in her life is further difficulties with labor. It is a scientific fact that with ages, women become less capable of reproduction, however, this capability depends specifically on the woman. There are some possible solutions to solve this problem. One of them is that women are encouraged to visit doctors before planning a pregnancy. Women that decided to have a child earlier in their lives, doesn't doom themselves on an unsuccessful career. On the contrary, many companies, especially in US, stimulate women to have a child with different kinds of compensations, starting from money and ending with higher salary. However, young parents sometimes are unable to earn enough money to the time they first have a child. Therefore, they think about having a child a few years later, after they will be in a higher position at work and have enough money to have a baby. This approach is specifically popular in Europe countries, as I know. For example, in Russia, the average age of having children is about 34 years. It is time, when parents could save some money to support their newborn. In my personal opinion, I support this approach for one main reason. I believe, that both children and parents should be satisfied with their lives: one with toys and another with successful career. To conclude, I believe that choosing the best time for labouring depends specifically on the women. Only she can fully evaluate her abilities and capabilities to have a child in a specific moment of her life. Which is better: to have children earlier or later in a woman’s life? What are possible reasons and effects of these two tendencies on a personal scale and for society in general? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
Nowadays,
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raise question about having
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earlier
or later in their
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. This essay will elaborate on most possible
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reasons
and effects of these two trends on a personal scale and for society
in general
.

One of the biggest
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reasons
that encourage
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women
to have a
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child
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earlier
in her life is
further
difficulties with labor. It is a scientific fact that with ages,
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women
become less capable of reproduction,
however
, this capability depends
specifically
on the woman. There are
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some
possible solutions to solve this problem. One of them is that
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women
are encouraged
to visit doctors
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before
planning a pregnancy.
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Women
that decided to have a
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child
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earlier
in their
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lives
, doesn't doom themselves on an unsuccessful career.
On the contrary
,
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many
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companies
,
especially
in US, stimulate
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women
to have a
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child
with
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different
kinds of compensations, starting from
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money
and ending with higher salary.

However
, young parents
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sometimes
are unable to earn
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enough
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money
to the time they
first
have a
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child
.
Therefore
, they
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think
about having a
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child
a few years later, after they will be in a higher position at work and have
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enough
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money
to have a baby. This approach is
specifically
popular in Europe countries, as I know.
For example
, in Russia, the average age of having
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children
is about 34 years. It is time, when parents could save
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some
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money
to support their newborn. In my personal opinion, I support this approach for one main
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reason
. I believe, that both
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children
and parents should
be satisfied
with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
: one with toys and another with successful career.

To conclude
, I believe that choosing the best time for
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labouring
depends
specifically
on the
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women
.
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Only
she can
fully
evaluate her abilities and capabilities to have a
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child
in a specific moment of her life. Which is better: to have
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children
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earlier
or later in a woman’s life? What are possible
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reasons
and effects of these two tendencies on a personal scale and for society
in general
? Support your answer with specific
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reasons
and examples.
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IELTS essay Which is better: to have children earlier or later in a woman’s life? What are possible reasons and effects of these two tendencies on a personal scale and for society in general? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

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4 paragraphs
343 words
6.0
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