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The best way to solve the traffic congestion in city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

The best way to solve the traffic congestion in city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. v. 4
Nowadays, heavy traffic congestion has become a challenging problem in many cities. Some people argue that free public transport service should be provided to tackle this problem. In my opinion, free public transport is certainly a great idea, but it is not viable way to ease traffic congestion. It is true that round the clock free public transport can reduce the occurrence of traffic congestion because in most cases traffic issues are caused by the presence of a large number of private vehicles on the road. If public transport services are provided free of cost and their frequency is increased, few people will want to drive their personal vehicles. This will theoretically reduce the number of cars on the roads and ease traffic congestion. On the flip side, when there are too many takers for the free public transport, buses and trains will become overcrowded. This will make the journey uncomfortable and many people will have to stand all the way. As a result, affluent commuters will choose not to use public transport. Instead, they will drive their own car to work and the traffic situation will get worse again. Another disadvantage of providing free public transport is that it is a huge burden on the government and as such it is not a viable idea in the long term. Personally I feel that instead of providing free public transport, the government should try to improve the frequency and reliability of buses and trains. It should also build wider roads and more flyovers. If people can ride comfortably on a bus or a train and still reach their destination on time, they will definitely consider that option. Hence, instead of making public transport a free service, what the government needs to do is to improve it. In addition, the government needs to ensure that the cost of traveling by a bus or train is always less than the cost of driving one’s own vehicle. To conclude, free public transport might seem to be a great way to tackle traffic congestion, but in my opinion, it is not a practical solution to this problem. A better option is to enhance the quality of public transport and subsidise its cost.
Nowadays, heavy
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traffic
congestion has become a challenging problem in
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many
cities.
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Some
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people
argue that
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free
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public
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transport
service should
be provided
to tackle this problem. In my opinion,
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free
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public
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transport
is
certainly
a great
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idea
,
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but
it is not
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viable
way to
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ease
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traffic
congestion.

It is true that round the clock
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free
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public
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transport
can
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reduce
the occurrence of
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traffic
congestion
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because
in most cases
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traffic
issues
are caused
by the presence of
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a large number of
private vehicles on the road. If
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public
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transport
services
are provided
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free
of
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cost
and their frequency
is increased
, few
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people
will want to drive their personal vehicles. This will
theoretically
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reduce
the number of cars on the roads and
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ease
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traffic
congestion.

On the flip side, when there are too
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many
takers for the
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free
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public
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transport
, buses and
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trains
will become overcrowded. This will
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make
the journey uncomfortable and
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many
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people
will
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have to
stand all the way.
As a result
, affluent commuters will choose not to
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use
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public
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transport
.
Instead
, they will drive their
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own
car to work and the
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traffic
situation will
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get
worse again. Another disadvantage of providing
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free
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public
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transport
is that it is a huge burden on the
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government
and as such it is not a viable
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idea
in the long term.

Personally
I feel that
instead
of providing
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free
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public
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transport
, the
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government
should try to
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improve
the frequency and reliability of buses and
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trains
. It should
also
build wider roads and more flyovers. If
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people
can ride
comfortably
on a bus or a
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train
and
still
reach their destination on time, they will definitely consider that option.
Hence
,
instead
of making
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public
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transport
a
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free
service, what the
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government
needs to do is to
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improve
it.
In addition
, the
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government
needs to ensure that the
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cost
of traveling by a bus or
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train
is always less than the
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cost
of driving one’s
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own
vehicle.

To conclude
,
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free
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public
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transport
might seem to be a great way to tackle
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traffic
congestion,
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but
in my opinion, it is not a practical solution to this problem. A better option is to enhance the quality of
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public
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transport
and
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subsidise
its
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cost
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
54Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay The best way to solve the traffic congestion in city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
368 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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