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With the evolution of contemporary society and its innovative spinoffs, the criterion of satisfaction has risen due to human thriving which has a growing detrimental impact on sea life. This essay agrees that use of oceans for recreation must be eliminated to decline the depletion.

With the evolution of contemporary society and its innovative spinoffs, the criterion of satisfaction has risen due to human thriving which has a growing detrimental impact on sea life. This essay agrees that use of oceans for recreation must be eliminated to decline the depletion. WgX6b
With the evolution of contemporary society and its innovative spinoffs, the criterion of satisfaction has risen due to human thriving which has a growing detrimental impact on sea life. This essay agrees that use of oceans for recreation must be eliminated to decline the depletion. First, the densely establishment of resorts and entertainment areas run along the beach is aimed at making profits. Equivalent to this, the degradation of oceans is wiser. Domestic trash, seafood production, and other issues have resulted from the resorts. Many areas lack public garbage cans and filthy water disposal facilities. This will have a direct impact on groundwater and, as a result, the spread of numerous illnesses. The kiosks are strategically situated right above the beaches to attract people to purchase. Along the coast, plastic bags, wrappers, candy shells, fruit peels, milk cartons, and other litter may be visible. Nobody, on the other hand, picks up or cleans up rubbish or leftovers that have been dropped on the sand. Garbage has polluted the coast significantly, giving visitors a negative impression. Furthermore, recreational economic activities namely surfing, diving, fishing, and other similar activities have the potential to destroy coral reefs and disturb animal species' natural habitats. The party garbage in yacht will be dropped directly into the sea and will not decompose. Tourism-related fishing and aquaculture is unsustainable, as it reduces species variety and destroys habitat. This discrepancy will lead to the extinction of valuable fish species. A wounded sea turtle's nose is stuffed with a sucking tube, and a dolphin's body is engulfed in nets. . . all these help in providing an overview of human brutality. In conclusion, the commercialization of coastal recreation has severely affected people's lives while also destroying sea life. As a result, the authority must come up with a solution to these concerns. And each of us has a role to play in raising environmental awareness.
With the evolution of contemporary society and its innovative
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, the criterion of satisfaction has risen due to human thriving which has a growing detrimental impact on
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sea
life. This essay
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agrees
that
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use
of oceans for recreation
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must
be eliminated
to decline the depletion.

First
, the
densely
establishment of resorts and entertainment areas run along the beach
is aimed
at making profits. Equivalent to this, the degradation of oceans is wiser. Domestic trash, seafood production, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
issues have resulted from the resorts.
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Many
areas lack public garbage cans and filthy water disposal facilities. This will have a direct impact on groundwater and,
as a result
, the spread of numerous illnesses. The kiosks are
strategically
situated right above the beaches to attract
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
. Along the coast, plastic bags, wrappers, candy shells, fruit peels, milk cartons, and
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other
litter may be visible. Nobody, on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, picks up or cleans up rubbish or leftovers that have
been dropped
on the sand. Garbage has polluted the coast
significantly
, giving visitors a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impression.

Furthermore
, recreational economic activities
namely
surfing, diving, fishing, and
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other
similar activities have the potential to
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destroy
coral reefs and disturb animal species' natural habitats. The party garbage in yacht will
be dropped
directly
into the
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sea
and will not decompose. Tourism-related fishing and aquaculture is unsustainable, as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduces
species variety and
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destroys
habitat. This discrepancy will lead to the extinction of valuable fish species. A wounded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sea
turtle's nose
is stuffed
with a sucking tube, and a dolphin's body
is engulfed
in nets.
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.
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.
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all
these
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help
in providing an overview of human brutality.

In conclusion
, the commercialization of coastal recreation has
severely
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affected
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people
's
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lives
while
also
destroying
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sea
life.
As a result
, the authority
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must
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come
up with a solution to these concerns. And each of us has a role to play in raising environmental awareness.
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IELTS essay With the evolution of contemporary society and its innovative spinoffs, the criterion of satisfaction has risen due to human thriving which has a growing detrimental impact on sea life. This essay agrees that use of oceans for recreation must be eliminated to decline the depletion.

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316 words
6.0
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