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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved? v.5

With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved? v. 5
Urbanization and overpopulation lead to the destruction of natural scenes of different countries. Tourism and environmental protection are some of the advantages of preserving those natural landscapes. Avoiding infrastructure and industrial development are some of the ways of keeping such areas. There are certain numerous positive outcomes of preserving natural areas. Natural places are having paramount importance in tourism and hence economics flourishing of a country. Visitors from other countries come to explore natural scenes of a host country. Which in turn is critical for a country’s economic growth, as the high influx of tourist’s means more revenue generation. Thailand, for example, has significantly strived for preserving and protecting its natural sceneries, in order to gain inflow of tourists every year. In addition, environmental pollution and devastated climate can be curbed by maintaining natural areas, owing to the greenery it possesses. Overall, natural areas are linked to the tourism growth and a better environment. Admittedly, there are ways to mitigate the ruination of attractive areas. Firstly, limiting or restricting infrastructure advancement is one of the solutions of keeping natural spots. Fostering infrastructure encourages deforestation and elimination of beautiful areas. For instance, expansion of roads, buildings, highways, and markets lead to the loss of appealing natural sites. Another solution is to stop or limit the running of industries and businesses in such areas. Therefore, discouraging infrastructure and business, industry evolution are the options of keeping natural areas unchanged. In conclusion, urban development and population growth are leading to the loss of natural essences of natural areas. Tourism rise and human friendly environment are the benefits of such areas. Avoiding or limiting the infrastructure and industry buildup are the ways to tackle vanishing of natural scenes.
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natural
scenes of
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different
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countries
.
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Tourism
and environmental protection are
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some of the
advantages of preserving those
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natural
landscapes. Avoiding
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infrastructure
and industrial development are
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some of the
ways of keeping such areas.

There are certain numerous
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positive
outcomes of preserving
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natural
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areas
.
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Natural
places are having paramount importance in
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tourism
and
hence
economics flourishing of a
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country
. Visitors from other
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countries
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come
to explore
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natural
scenes of a host
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country
. Which in turn is critical for a
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country’s
economic growth, as the high influx of tourist’s means more revenue generation. Thailand,
for example
, has
significantly
strived for preserving and protecting its
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natural
sceneries, in order to gain inflow of tourists every year.
In addition
, environmental pollution and devastated climate can
be curbed
by maintaining
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natural
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areas
, owing to the greenery it possesses.
Overall
,
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natural
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areas
are linked
to the
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tourism
growth and a better environment.

Admittedly
, there are ways to mitigate the ruination of attractive
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areas
.
Firstly
, limiting or restricting
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infrastructure
advancement is one of the solutions of keeping
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natural
spots. Fostering
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infrastructure
encourages deforestation and elimination of
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beautiful
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areas
.
For instance
, expansion of roads, buildings, highways, and markets lead to the loss of appealing
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natural
sites. Another solution is to
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stop
or limit the running of industries and businesses in such
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areas
.
Therefore
, discouraging
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infrastructure
and business, industry evolution are the options of keeping
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natural
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areas
unchanged.

In conclusion
, urban development and population growth are leading to the loss of
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natural
essences of
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natural
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areas
.
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Tourism
rise and human friendly environment are the benefits of such
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areas
. Avoiding or limiting the
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infrastructure
and industry buildup are the ways to tackle vanishing of
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natural
scenes.
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IELTS essay With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved? v. 5

Essay
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4 paragraphs
284 words
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