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Do you agree or disagree with cultural diversity in the international companies?

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Today, we can enjoy the task of using an Acer laptop, shopping through Shopee, and doing many things using products from multinational companies, including eating the BTS Meal that is happening. Technological developments and rapid globalization have made all of this possible. The company is now not only operating domestically, but also expanding its business to become a multinational company, both in physical buildings, human resources, as well as material and technological resources. Being a multinational company definitely does not escape cultural diversity, which means that the work environment is made up of people from different geographic, religious, linguistic and political backgrounds. Some argue that these differences will help support work-to-work and have a negative impact on the many companies that intelligently manage cultural diversity in the workplace. I agree and support cultural diversity because there are so many advantages.

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