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Cultural diversity in the international companies

Cultural diversity in the international companies 5AbqA
In most activities we do every single day, we use some products from multinational companies, such as finishing our homework using Acer, shopping through Shopee, eating the BTS Meal that is electrifying right now. Technological developments and rapid globalization have made all of this possible. The company nowadays not only operates domestically, but is also expands its business to become a multinational company, both in physical buildings, human resources, as well as material and technological resources. Being a multinational company definitely does not escape cultural diversity, which means that the work environment is made up of people from various geographic, religious, linguistic and political backgrounds. While this cultural diversity can undoubtedly have an adverse impact, communication and even dissent between the employer, many companies maintain cultural diversity and intelligently manage it. In my view, cultural diversity is a positive condition in light of the fact that there are a plethora of advantages.
In most activities we do every single day, we
use
some
products from multinational
companies
, such as finishing our homework using Acer, shopping through
Shopee
, eating the BTS Meal
that is
electrifying right
now
. Technological developments and rapid globalization have made all of this possible. The
company
nowadays not
only
operates
domestically
,
but
is
also
expands its business to become a multinational
company
, both in physical buildings, human resources,
as well as
material and technological resources. Being a multinational
company
definitely does not escape
cultural
diversity
, which means that the work environment
is made
up of
people
from various geographic, religious, linguistic and political backgrounds. While this
cultural
diversity
can
undoubtedly
have an adverse impact, communication and even dissent between the employer,
many
companies
maintain
cultural
diversity
and
intelligently
manage it. In my view,
cultural
diversity
is a
positive
condition in light of the fact that there are a plethora of advantages.
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IELTS essay Cultural diversity in the international companies

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  American English
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