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With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested.

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I agree with the idea that With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested. I have severaarguments to support my opinion. First of all, I think that it's necessary to have a vehicle because it is one of the best way of transportation. Nowadays almost everyone have a vehicle and it is the cause of crowded cities. It's almost impossible to move by vehicle during rush hour. Moreover, I think that it's so hard to solve this problems. But I think that we can decrease number of vehicles. People should move by undergrounds, busses or taxies. It's not necessary to everyone mov by vehicle or everyone have a vehicle and it will decrease the pollution of our environment. These are the reasons why I agree that With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested.
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that With an increase in the number of
privately
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owned
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vehicles
, roads are becoming more congested. I have
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severaarguments
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it's
necessary to have a
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vehicle
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because
it is one of the best way of transportation. Nowadays almost everyone
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have
a
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vehicle
and it is the cause of crowded cities.
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It's
almost impossible to
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move
by
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vehicle
during rush hour.
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think
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it's
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problems.
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But
I
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think
that we can decrease number of
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vehicles
.
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People
should
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move
by undergrounds, busses or
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taxies
.
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It's
not necessary to everyone
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mov
by
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vehicle
or everyone
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have
a
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vehicle
and it will decrease the pollution of our environment. These are the reasons why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that With an increase in the number of
privately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
, roads are becoming more congested.

IELTS essay With an increase in the number of privately owned vehicles, roads are becoming more congested.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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