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With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists.

With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists. 73roX
due to large number of multiple social media online, an individual oftentimes tend to add total strangers to their friend lists. It is argued that if this will be helpful to find friends or just mean to promote their self-esteem, from my point of view it is considered both are not advisable to an individual to do this in social media. Website Social media is the easiest way to invite and send request to anyone to become a friend, even you did not know totally a person. There are some people wanted to have more friends around the world, may be they are happy doing this. They love to meet knew friends, however, this habit can cause danger or harmful in their life, because they do not know whom they are inviting as a friend, totally unaware of what is the background, they do not know if a person has a criminal record or mentally ill and this might put their life in trouble, or they might meet a person online that can hack their account and steal their identity that can possibly use it in crime. As you see in news that they are enormous number related to cyber crime. On the other hand, there are also people doing this habit by adding new friends in online lists because they wanted to promote themselves in the public, they are proud of presenting what they have accomplish in life, it short they feel being self-centered. They wanted people attract and look at them as someone in social media. For example, they posted a pictures in their media account, so those people whom he/she invited as friend might see the pictures and this will increase his/her self-esteem. In conclusion, it is good to have friends in social media account such as in facebook, instagram, messenger, yahoo or google account, but make sure that those you invited and accepted as a friends are you know very well. It is not advisable to open your social media account to any one especially to strangers. increase self-esteem: attract other people with their pride
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due
to large number of multiple
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social
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online, an individual oftentimes tend to
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add
total strangers to their
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friend
lists. It
is argued
that if this will be helpful to find
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friends
or
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mean to promote their self-esteem, from my point of view it
is considered
both are not advisable to an individual to do this in
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social
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. Website
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Social
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media
is the easiest way to invite and
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send
request to anyone to become a
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friend
, even you did not
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know
totally
a person. There are
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some
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people
wanted to have more
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friends
around the world,
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may be
they are happy doing this. They
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to
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, this habit can cause
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danger
or harmful in their life,
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they do not
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whom they are inviting as a
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friend
,
totally
unaware of what is the background, they do not
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know
if a person has a criminal record or mentally ill and this might put their
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life
in trouble, or they might
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meet
a person online that can hack their
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account
and steal their identity that can
possibly
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use
it in crime.
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in news that they are enormous number related to cyber crime.
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doing this habit by adding new
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friends
in online lists
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they wanted to promote themselves in the public, they are proud of presenting what they have
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accomplish
in life, it
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they feel being self-centered. They wanted
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people
attract and look at them as someone in
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media
.
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, they posted
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a pictures
in their
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,
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those
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whom he/she invited as
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see
the pictures and this will increase his/her self-esteem.
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to have
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in
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such as
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in facebook
,
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instagram
, messenger, yahoo or google
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,
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make
sure that those you invited and
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accepted
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friends
are you
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know
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well. It is not advisable to open your
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social
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media
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account
to
Did you mean "anyone"?
any one
especially
to strangers.

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increase
self-esteem: attract other
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people
with their pride
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IELTS essay With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
348 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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