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will price of oil goes up or not. and if it goes up what abut price of gas.

will price of oil goes up or not. and if it goes up what abut price of gas. El7QD
According to my view, the price of oil and gas will go up. There are many reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, Saudi Armco controls the price of oil because it is the largest producer of oil in the oil-producing club of nations knows as OPEC and also the largest exporter of petroleum among OPEC countries. The country's current reserves are around 16% of the world's total reserves. Saudi Armco supplies one out of every eight barrels of oil in the world. It is the only company that can produce a barrel of oil for less than ten dollars and if it goes public, the company has to increase the price to make more profit. Saudi Arabia partially trades Saudi Armco for a valuation of 2 trillion dollars and to get that valuation, the company will have to disclose everything if they want to attract potential Investors. Every decision they make has to be in the interest of the stakeholder. Armco was making money for the benefit of states but if it goes public then they have to think about their quarterly report. The second reason to support my opinion is that Fossil fuels are limited and at the current rate of use oil will be exhausted. Saudi Arabia has used 100 billion barrels in 30 years and has around 260 billion barrels left which means within 70 years oil will be rare. Anything whether it is oil or gold price increase, has it become difficult to find. And if the price of oil increase then definitely price of gas increase because oil is an ingredient for gas. At this time we do not have enough Technology to find an alternative to oil and gas. There are some alternatives like electric vehicles, solar energy, and hydrogen engines but the problem with them is that there are difficult to use. Electric vehicles take 10 hours to recharge which cannot be run on long routes. Solar Energy can't be generated on rainy or cloudy days. So, our only option is fossil fuels and we are ready to pay for it at any cost.
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oil
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it is the largest producer of
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in the oil-producing club of nations knows as OPEC and
also
the largest exporter of petroleum among OPEC countries. The country's
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reserves are around 16% of the world's total reserves. Saudi
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Armco
supplies one out of every eight
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barrels
of
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oil
in the world. It is the
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only
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company
that can produce a
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oil
for less than ten dollars and if it goes public, the
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company
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has to
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increase
the
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to
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more profit. Saudi Arabia
partially
trades Saudi
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for a valuation of 2 trillion dollars and to
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that valuation, the
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disclose everything if they want to attract potential Investors. Every decision they
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make
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be in the interest of the stakeholder.
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was making money for the benefit of states
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if it goes public then they
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think
about their quarterly report.

The second reason to support my opinion is that Fossil fuels
are limited
and at the
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current
rate of
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use
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will
be exhausted
. Saudi Arabia has
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used
100 billion
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in 30 years and has around 260 billion
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left
which means within 70 years
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will be rare. Anything whether it is
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oil
or gold
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price
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increase
, has it become difficult to find. And if the
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of
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oil
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then definitely
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of gas
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increase
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because
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oil
is an ingredient for gas.

At this time we do not have
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enough
Technology to find an alternative to
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oil
and gas. There are
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alternatives like electric vehicles, solar energy, and hydrogen engines
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but
the problem with them is that there are difficult to
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use
. Electric vehicles take 10 hours to recharge which cannot
be run
on long routes. Solar Energy can't
be generated
on rainy or cloudy days.
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So
, our
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option is fossil
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fuels and
we are ready to pay for it at any cost.
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IELTS essay will price of oil goes up or not. and if it goes up what abut price of gas.

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351 words
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