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Can computer replace teachers at school?

Can computer replace teachers at school? 53BEB
In today’s world, the use of computers to assist teached learning is a significant application. Some argue that we should exclude/ abandon the conventional way and acquire and disseminate knowledge online. However, rather than (instead of) replacing teachers, I believe we can take advantage of computers to assist them. First, computers can identify the errors of tests but it cannot determine why, because the computers are only designed to respond to questions. Teachers, on the other hand, are actual individuals who have both simple and advanced skills. They will evaluate exams and provide students with clear answers for each question. Second, computers lack the ability to communicate to students through speech and emotion. Lessons are only provided on screen by computers, and students must learn them on their own. However, teachers have a voice and sensitivity. They have the ability to communicate with students and educate them by their sweet voice that encourage students to become more interested in studying. Furthermore, the relationship between teachers and students is extremely valuable. That is what a machine, despite its modernity, cannot do. The instructor already knows what their students need based on their previous teaching experiences. Those who teach need to have good human spirit. No matter how clever a student is, if the teacher is not able to convey inspiration, it is still difficult for that student to develop his critical thinking. To sum up, computers are only used to aid in the teaching process. We should not change the traditional way of human teaching because there is no substitute for teachers.
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learning is a significant application.
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argue that we should exclude/ abandon the conventional way and acquire and disseminate knowledge online.
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,
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of) replacing
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teachers
, I believe we can take advantage of computers to assist them.

First
, computers can identify the errors of
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tests
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it cannot determine why,
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the computers are
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only
designed to respond to questions.
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Teachers
,
on the other hand
, are actual individuals who have both simple and advanced
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skills
. They will evaluate exams and provide
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students
with
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clear
answers for each question.

Second, computers lack the ability to communicate to
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students
through speech and emotion. Lessons are
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only
provided on screen by computers, and
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students
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must
learn them on their
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own
.
However
,
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teachers
have a voice and sensitivity. They have the ability to communicate with
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students
and educate them by their sweet voice that encourage
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students
to become more interested in studying.

Furthermore
, the relationship between
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teachers
and
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students
is
extremely
valuable.
That is
what a machine, despite its modernity, cannot do. The instructor already knows what their
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students
need based on their previous teaching experiences. Those who teach need to have
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good
human spirit. No matter how clever a
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student
is, if the
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teacher
is not able to convey inspiration, it is
still
difficult for that
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student
to develop his critical thinking.

To sum up, computers are
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only
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used
to aid in the teaching process. We should not
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change
the traditional way of human teaching
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because
there is no substitute for
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teachers
.
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IELTS essay Can computer replace teachers at school?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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