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Wild animals should not be kept as pets , disagree

Wild animals should not be kept as pets, disagree m2DJA

I disagree that wild animals should not be kept as pets. Wild animals are dangerous because they are species that live as predators. They have complicated behavior that people can not control. They are lovely and adorable when they are young but once they are mature, Their behavior turns aggressive and may harm their owner. Besides this wild animals carry diseases such as rabies, herpes viruses, polio etc… that could transfer to their owner and surroundings. They originally live and hunt in the wild, but if you raise them when they are young and release them to the wild when they are mature they cannot survive on their own. Aside from these, it is illegal in most countries to keep wild animals as pets.

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