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Why you want to study in English - Summer school

Why you want to study in English - Summer school GlkLx
Wow, firstly, this is just a great opportunity for me to take my English language to the high level, secondly to learn a lot of new and interesting things. In the third, meet new friends, learn more about the culture and values of the United States (because I have great respect and love this country). I am sure that Samarkand - USA English Camp 2021, with summer camp program will take my leadership qualities to a new level, this giving me confidence in my many qualities and generally spend a great, informative and happy time!
Wow,
firstly
, this is
just
a great opportunity for me to take my English language to the high level,
secondly
to learn
a lot of
new and interesting things. In the third,
meet
new friends, learn more about the culture and values of the United States (
because
I have great respect and
love
this country). I am sure that Samarkand
-
USA English Camp 2021, with summer camp program will take my leadership qualities to a new level, this giving me confidence in my
many
qualities and
generally
spend a great, informative and happy time!
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IELTS essay Why you want to study in English - Summer school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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