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Airport for redevelopment next year

Airport for redevelopment next year 5boaP

The illustrations describe the changes that an airport site will undergo after its planned renovation in the coming year. Overall, the concentration of redevelopment will be the extension of gates to two wings, additional shops and cafes and designated area for car hires while security and passport control and customs retain their current locations. In its original design, the departure lounge has a café and check-in area unlike its arrivals which is just an empty space for travelers. After passing through security and passport control in the departures, and customs and passport control in the arrivals, a wide corridor converges to the central entrance for the rectangular eight gates wherein a walkway on the left side can be utilized. As improvements are planned, the café in the departures will be moved directly left of its entrance as the check-in area is moved to its place, while a bag drop is made available opposite the latter. Beyond the passport and security check, shops are established in the pathway to the gates which now has a sky train at the center which may be used to approach the Y-shaped left wing of the gates one to nine. In contrast with the previously spacious arrivals lounge, a small extension dedicated for car hires will be constructed on the right as an ATM and café are set on the same side. Checks for passport and customs will carry out as usual leading to entry to gates 10-18, with enabled access of the sky train.

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describe
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changes
 that an airport site will undergo after its planned renovation in the coming year.

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, the concentration of redevelopment will be the extension of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gates
 to two wings, additional shops and 'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 and designated area for car hires while security and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlicensekeypermitticketwarrantauthorization
passport
 control and customs retain their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 locations.

In its original design, the departure lounge has a café and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in area unlike its arrivals which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 an empty space for travelers. After passing through security and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlicensekeypermitticketwarrantauthorization
passport
 control in the departures, and customs and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlicensekeypermitticketwarrantauthorization
passport
 control in the arrivals, a wide corridor converges to the central entrance for the rectangular eight You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gates
 wherein a walkway on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side can be utilized
.

As improvements are planned
, the café in the departures will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of its entrance as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to its place, while a bag drop is made
 available opposite the latter. Beyond the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlicensekeypermitticketwarrantauthorization
passport
 and security This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
, shops are established
 in the pathway to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gates
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 has a sky train at the center which may be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to approach the Y-shaped This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 wing of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gates
 one to nine.

In contrast
 with the previously spacious arrivals lounge, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 extension dedicated for car hires will be constructed
 on the right as an ATM and café are set
 on the same side. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
Checks
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlicensekeypermitticketwarrantauthorization
passport
 and customs will carry out as usual leading to entry to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gates
 10-18, with enabled access of the sky train. 