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why we live longer than in the past

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The quality of education is improved, the quality of teachers is better, many good professors and doctors were born to train future generations to become useful citizens for society. Future generations will continue to research and develop the achievements of previous generations, creating works that improve lives. as the world's society has grown considerably, the advancement in technology and medicinal research have made it possible to cure many diseases, people's life are improved in a positive direction
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diseases,
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IELTS essay why we live longer than in the past

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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