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Some p eople think that governments should give financial artists such as painters and musicians. Others beli funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views a People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While disagree with the idea of government support for ar projects should come from both governments and othe Some art projects definitely require help f works of art in public spaces, such as streets or s example, there are several new statues and sculptur which has been redeveloped recently. history. They serve to educate people about the cit points for visitors and tourists. Governments and l artists to produce this kind of art, b much less interesting and attractive. On the other hand, I can understand the arguments a art. The main reason for this view is that governme For example, state budgets need to be spent on educatio and security, among other areas. These public servi function properly, whereas the work of creative art luxury. Another reason for this opinion is that artists do professional, and they should therefore earn their In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists s financial s upport, but in my opinion government help is someti (263 words) eople think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views a nd give your own opinion. views about the funding of creative artists. While disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources. Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many works of art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example, there are several new statues and sculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without their funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive. On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for art. The main reason for this view is that governments have more important concerns. example, state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security, among other areas. These public services are vital for a country to function properly, whereas the work of creative artists, even in public places, is a Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like any other professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling their work. In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of upport, but in my opinion government help is someti mes necessary. support to creative some people n, healthcare, infrastructure a job like any other mes neces
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artists to produce this kind of
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much less interesting and attractive.

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hand, I can understand the arguments
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art. The main
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and security, among
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function
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luxury.

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professional, and they should
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financial
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eople
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support to creative

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artists
such as painters and musicians. Others believe that
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creative
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artists
should
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funded
by alternative sources. Discuss both
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give your
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opinion.

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views
about the
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funding
of
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creative
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artists
. While

disagree with the
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idea
of
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government
support for
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artists
, I believe that money for art

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projects
should
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come
from both
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and
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art
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works
of
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spaces, such as streets or squares in city
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. In Liverpool,
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example, there are several new statues and sculptures in the
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docks
area of the city,

which has
been redeveloped
recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage
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and


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history
. They serve to educate
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people
about the city, and act as landmarks or
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talking


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points
for visitors and tourists.
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and local councils should pay
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creative


artists to produce this kind of
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without their
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funding
our cities would be

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much
less interesting and attractive.

On the
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other
hand, I can understand the arguments against
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government
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funding
for

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art
. The main
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reason
for this
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view
is that
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governments
have more
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important
concerns.

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example
, state budgets need to
be spent
on education, healthcare, infrastructure

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and
security, among
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other
areas. These
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public
services are vital for a country
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to


function
properly
, whereas the work of
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creative
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artists
, even in
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public
places, is a

Another
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reason
for this
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opinion
is that
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artists
do

a job like any other

professional, and they should
therefore
earn their

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own
money by selling their work.

In conclusion
, there are
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why
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upport
,
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necessary.

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to creative

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IELTS essay Some p eople think that governments should give financial artists such as painters

Essay
  American English
40 paragraphs
504 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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