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"Tourism should be banned to protect local environments, cultures, and economies. " Evaluate the impact of tourism in these three areas. * The continuous visit of people to a particular historical site or an area with a Unique culture will in the long run bring about an international recognition to the way of people living in the area of focus by tourists. International Recognition by tourist and people from various walks of life is expected to then lead to researches, investments etc which is believed will improve the Quality of life of the people living in a particular geographical location. In 2016, the travel and tourism sector contributed $2. 3 trillion directly to the global economy, Indirectly, the sector accounted for 10. 2 percent of global GDP ($7. 6 trillion), 292 million jobs, $1. 5 trillion in exports, and 30 percent of services exports (World Travel and Tourism Council, 2017). With the help of tourism, persons living within and around a tourist site are expected to be gainfully employed as tour guides, tour drivers, accommodation providers, etc due to the various traveling and hotel arrangement of tourists. Also an increase in Tax revenue accruing to the government from various financial and nonfinancial activities influenced by tourists are expected due to various purchases and other expenditures.
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Tourism should
be banned
to protect local environments, cultures, and

economies.
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Evaluate the impact of
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tourism
in these three areas. *

The continuous visit of
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people
to a particular historical site or an area with a Unique

culture will in the long run bring about an international recognition to the way of

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people
living in the area of focus by tourists. International Recognition by tourist

and
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people
from
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various
walks of life is
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expected
to then lead to researches,

investments etc which
is believed
will
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improve
the Quality of life of the
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people


living in a particular geographical location.

In 2016, the travel and
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tourism
sector contributed $2. 3 trillion
directly
to the global

economy,
Indirectly
, the sector accounted for 10. 2 percent of global GDP ($7. 6

trillion), 292 million jobs, $1. 5 trillion in exports, and 30 percent of services exports

(World Travel and
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Tourism
Council, 2017). With the
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help
of
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tourism
, persons living

within and around a tourist site are
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expected
to be
gainfully
employed as tour

guides, tour drivers, accommodation providers, etc due to the
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various
traveling and

hotel arrangement of tourists.
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Also
an increase in Tax revenue accruing to the

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government
from
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financial and
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nonfinancial
activities influenced by

tourists are
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purchases
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IELTS essay why tourist should be banned

Essay
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4 paragraphs
215 words
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