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Why should you travel to Australia

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Throughout the years, Australia has captivated the world with its unique natural wonders and remarkable landmarks. The Sydney Opera house is regarded as one of the most renowned venues in the world. Located on the Sydney Harbour, The Sydney Opera House is a multi-venue performing arts centre visited by more than 10. 9 tourists each year. Australia is also home to one of the natural wonders of the world: The Great Barrier Reef. The reef is located in the Coral Sea, off the coast of Queensland, Australia. With more than 2, 900 individual reefs and 900 islands stretching for over 2, 300 kilometres over an area of approximately 344, 400 square kilometres, The Great Barrier Reef is the world’s largest coral reef system. Australia does not only offer beautiful natural wonders and landmarks, it also illustrates many contrasting cultures, diverse cities, and exotic wilderness that is proven to be a once in a lifetime experience.
Throughout the years, Australia has captivated the
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with its unique natural wonders and remarkable landmarks. The Sydney Opera
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is regarded
as one of the most renowned venues in the
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. Located on the Sydney
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, The Sydney Opera
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is a multi-venue performing arts
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visited by more than 10. 9 tourists each year. Australia is
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home to one of the natural wonders of the
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: The Great Barrier
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. The
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is located
in the Coral Sea, off the coast of Queensland, Australia. With more than 2, 900 individual
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and 900 islands stretching for over 2, 300
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over an area of approximately 344, 400 square
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, The Great Barrier
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is the
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largest coral
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system. Australia does not
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IELTS essay Why should you travel to Australia

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