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Having a good memory is the only requirement to be successful in life. Do you agree or disagree??

Having a good memory is the only requirement to be successful in life. ? 968pn
In this concurrent world, success varies from person to person and success is all about hard work and goal oriented. So there several other factors affect on successive life. There is no relationship between success and remembrance. I disagree with this notion. My further explanations will be in subsequent paragraphs. To commence with adequate evidences are obtainable to authenticate the concept of good memories associated with success. The first paramount crux is individual performance and hardships always give a accomplishment in individuals lives. For instance, if the person work with one organisation. They need to work with passionately and honestly. In fact, the performance in a company decides if an employee is successful due to the large percents of time spent on it. Second nub which cannot be neglect is everybody has their own aims and responsibilities to do something that contribute the world. For example, student have goals to archive good marks in exam, employees have some target which given by their managers they need to complete in timeline and so on. Therefore, goals are always crucial for successful lives. However, However, this is not true that everything is about goals all the time. Sometimes happy moments are very essential. For example, a young kid is first time walk and speak something is a happy memory for their parents. They have no specific goals at that time but can become the best memories in their childhood. Hence they are some kinds of success in a sense. To sum everything up, I reiterate thats people should pursue clear aims upon everything we do. In other word, we should distinguish work and entertainments.
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varies from person to person and
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is all about
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on successive life. There is no relationship between
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success
and remembrance. I disagree with this notion. My
further
explanations will be in subsequent paragraphs.

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memories associated with
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. The
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paramount crux is individual performance and hardships always give
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accomplishment in individuals
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.
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, if the person
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work
with one
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. They need to
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with
passionately
and
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. In fact, the performance in a
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company
decides if an employee is successful due to the large percents of
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time
spent on it. Second nub which cannot be neglect is everybody has their
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own
aims and responsibilities to do something that contribute the world.
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, student have
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goals
to archive
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good
marks in exam, employees have
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some
target which
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given
by their managers they need to complete in timeline and
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on.
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,
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are always crucial for successful
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, this is not true that everything is about
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all the
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.
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Sometimes
happy moments are
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essential.
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, a young kid is
first
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time
walk and speak something is a happy memory for their parents. They have no specific
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goals
at that
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time
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but
can become the best memories in their childhood.
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they are
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kinds of
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in a sense.

To sum everything up, I reiterate
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should pursue
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aims upon everything we do. In other word, we should distinguish
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work
and entertainments.
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IELTS essay Having a good memory is the only requirement to be successful in life. ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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