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Discuss negative and positive aspects of having lower rates of airplane tickets for travellers

Discuss negative and positive aspects of having lower rates of airplane tickets for travellers GL1ne
Air transport has become an indispensable part of our lives. With the innovation of low- price airlines, air travel has become more popular inspite of having lack of conveniences with normal air travellers. This trend has both advantages and disadvantages, which shall be explaining in this essay. To commence with, one of the best advantages of this travel is that, it allows even ordinary people to fly in the sky since, the ticket rates are cheaper. For example, people who had a lifetime dream to travel ina plane once, it offers an opportunity to make it happen. Moreover, people who often travel in the sky can make use of this availability. Another advantage of this process is that, it leads to the development of several sectors, such as hotels, airline companies, transportation facilities and business are some among this list. As the number of passengers increase, opportunity to cherish economically and commercially also increase. Turning to the flip side, the major concern is related to the environment. When more frequent flights move on the air, there would be air traffic, which proportionally can increase the amount of toxic gas emission into the atmosphere, and eventually this create reason for global warming. In addition, another possible reason can be related to the customers satisfaction. To be precise, cheap-rate flight does not provide ample facilities as normal does. For example, getting drinks and snacks, extra soft pillows may not be obtainable. Furthermore, passengers need to book well in advance, and mostly if they needs to change or cancel, it may not be easy. When there are more travellers, security is often compromised to ensure the travel without any delay, which might lead to an unwelcoming events. To sum up, it is understandable that when more lower-prices of air planes available, there can be ups and downs which will affect different regions of society both positively and negatively.
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transport has become an indispensable part of our
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lives
. With the innovation of low- price airlines,
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air
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travel
has become more popular
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inspite
of having lack of conveniences with normal
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air
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travellers
. This trend has both advantages and disadvantages, which shall be explaining in this essay.

To commence with, one of the best advantages of this
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travel
is that, it
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allows
even ordinary
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people
to
fly
in the sky since, the ticket rates are cheaper.
For example
,
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people
who had a lifetime dream to
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travel
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ina
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plane
once, it offers an opportunity to
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make
it happen.
Moreover
,
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people
who
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often
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travel
in the sky can
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make
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use
of this availability. Another advantage of this process is that, it leads to the development of several sectors, such as hotels, airline
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companies
, transportation facilities and business are
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some
among this list. As the number of passengers increase, opportunity to cherish
economically
and
commercially
also
increase.

Turning to the flip side, the major concern
is related
to the environment. When more frequent flights
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move
on the
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air
, there would be
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air
traffic, which
proportionally
can increase the amount of toxic gas emission into the atmosphere, and
eventually
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this create
reason for global warming.
In addition
, another possible reason can
be related
to the
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customers
satisfaction. To be precise,
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cheap
-rate flight does not provide ample facilities as normal does.
For example
, getting drinks and snacks, extra soft pillows may not be obtainable.
Furthermore
, passengers need to book well in advance, and
mostly
if they
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needs
to
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change
or cancel, it may not be easy. When there are more
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travellers
, security is
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often
compromised to ensure the
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travel
without any delay, which might lead to an unwelcoming
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events
.

To sum up, it is understandable that when more lower-prices of
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air
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planes
available, there can be ups and downs which will affect
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different
regions of society both
positively
and
negatively
.
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IELTS essay Discuss negative and positive aspects of having lower rates of airplane tickets for travellers

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