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Piano - The Potentate of Instruments

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Piano is certainly the most played instrument in the world. About 21 million Americans play the piano, according to Creative Soul Music School. It can be played in many genres, it can be played solo or accompanied. However, it needs patience, determination and dedication in practicing to play this instrument well. Have you ever wondered about its origin? or how do people build a piano? Well, you won’t need to wonder about those things anymore because the answers are waiting for you in this magazine!
Piano is
certainly
the most played instrument in the world. About 21 million Americans play the piano, according to Creative Soul Music School. It can
be played
in
many
genres, it can
be played
solo or accompanied.
However
, it needs patience, determination and dedication in
practicing to play
this instrument well. Have you ever wondered about its origin?
or
how do
people
build a piano? Well, you won’t need to wonder about those things anymore
because
the answers are waiting for you in this magazine!
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IELTS essay Piano - The Potentate of Instruments

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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