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WHY SHOULD WE PROTECT OUR ENVIRONMENT

WHY SHOULD WE PROTECT OUR ENVIRONMENT pX38D
Our environment is the surroundings where we live. There are so many living and non living things around. Some are natural and some are man made. Either way we have come through such a living that we cannot skip these things in our day to day life. So it is very important and need of the hour to preserve all things that make up our environment. There are many ways to protect our environment. It is important to understand them and implement them in our lives.
Our environment is the surroundings where we
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live
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so
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many
living and
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non living
things around.
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Some
are natural and
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some
are
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man
made. Either way we have
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come
through such a living that we cannot skip these things in our
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day to day
life.
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So
it is
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very
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important
and need of the hour to preserve all things that
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make
up our environment. There are
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many
ways to protect our environment. It is
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important
to understand them and implement them in our
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lives
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IELTS essay WHY SHOULD WE PROTECT OUR ENVIRONMENT

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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