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Why Should Kids Learn Gardening

Why Should Kids Learn Gardening Ydq2K

Nowadays, in most of the countries, we can see air pollution, from cars, buses, etc. The noise and black smock coming from vehicles pollute the air and damage the ozone layer. Planting trees can be a hobby for some children and planting more trees can fight the polluted air and can have clean air to breathe. Trees observe carbondioxide for photosynthesis and release oxygen to air. Some children are admitted to video games and not doing anything to them parents must train them to do gardening. We can get healthy food from our home garden and get a healthy life.

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