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Agree or Disagree with the statement, Pluto is Planet.

Agree or Disagree with the statement, Pluto is Planet. 8LoQV
The Article introduces the topic of Planet. More specifically it explains why the Pluto lost its status as planet in International Astronomy Union Conference in 2006. The decision have been wrapped up in controversy ever since. The reading suggests that decision was generally accepted and was based on the new scientific information. However the lecture refutes the idea, suggesting that the astronomy community was not fairly represented in the vote to demote Pluto as dwarf planet and many people disagree with the decision. According to the reading, Pluto was demoted due to its size. However the lecturer states that demotion is mainly due to the fact that Pluto didn’t fit the new definition of the planet to have clear neighbor with its orbit. While Pluto doesn’t, neither does other planets including the earth due to presence of asteroids in their orbit. Finally the reading implies that people will soon forget the Pluto as the planet. In contrast, the lecture mentions about the petition and special ways that citizen are honoring the beloved Pluto. As per the article, in future, the children will only know the eight planets in the solar system but the lecture claims that Pluto will always hold the special place in their heart. To sum up, both the reading and the lecture holds conflicting view on this
The Article introduces the topic of
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Planet
. More
specifically
it
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explains
why the
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Pluto
lost its status as
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planet
in International Astronomy Union Conference in 2006. The decision have
been wrapped
up in controversy ever since.

The
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reading
suggests that decision was
generally
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accepted
and
was based
on the new scientific information.
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However
the
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lecture
refutes the
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idea
, suggesting that the astronomy community was not
fairly
represented in the vote to demote
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Pluto
as dwarf
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planet
and
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many
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people
disagree with the decision.

According to the
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reading
,
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Pluto
was demoted
due to its size.
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However
the lecturer states that demotion is
mainly
due to the fact that
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Pluto
didn’t fit the new definition of the
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planet
to have
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clear
neighbor with its orbit. While
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Pluto
doesn’t, neither does other
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planets
including the earth due to presence of asteroids in their orbit.

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Finally
the
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reading
implies that
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people
will
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soon
forget the
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Pluto
as the
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planet
.
In contrast
, the
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lecture
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mentions about the
petition and special ways
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that citizen are
honoring the beloved
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Pluto
. As per the article,
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in future
, the children will
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only
know the eight
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planets
in the solar system
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but
the
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lecture
claims that
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Pluto
will always hold the special place in their heart.

To sum up, both the
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reading
and the
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lecture
holds conflicting view on this
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IELTS essay Agree or Disagree with the statement, Pluto is Planet.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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