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why people remember their gifts?

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There are many reasons for why people remember their gifts take different people. Gifts are special kind of materials. These are sometimes flowers, toys, money, computer, house or anything. Gifts are not always material, these are maybe kiss, important words, sentences. Some type of smiling are be gifts for upset people. Gifts used in different times and situations. Some of these gifts are given to workers in companies anniversaries, companies gives awards to experienced people for long years working. Some school do competition for students good skill, then succeeded of students received gifts. Some people give each other to gifts especially flowers on Valentines Day on 14 th February for love. Birthdays are much special than some of the gifts times, people receive any kind of gifts from their friends. In conclusion, all of gifts influence people who received. If people most emotional they are remembered most, and effected a lot.
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flowers, toys, money, computer,
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are not always material, these are maybe kiss,
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words, sentences.
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type of smiling are be
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for upset
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people
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Gifts
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times and situations.
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anniversaries,
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for long years working.
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do competition for students
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good
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, then succeeded of students received
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receive any kind of
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from their friends.

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, all of
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IELTS essay why people remember their gifts?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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