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why people now live longer than in the past

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In these modern days, people's life expectancy is much more longer than it used to be in the past. There were many diseases which were unnamed and unsolvable but the fact is totally changed now. I will discuss some reasons for it. Firstly is the knowledge, people now can access to many sources to find out how to protect themselves from illness and become healthier. Not only basic knowledge but also academic ones is strongly elevated. Scientists and pharmacists are now able to analyse the virus structure and invent medicines to kill it. Second reason is high standard of living, which come along with the development of technology, modern science and economy. We have better health service now and people tend to spend more expenditure on protecting their health.

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