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How suger is produced from suger cane

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There are seven steps for manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. After 12-18 months growing sugar cane with hands or machine we should harvest them. obviously harvesting by Hands is time-consuming. by crushing this sugar cane juice will make however it is not pure. for purifying juice we need timestone filter. After collecting juice by an evaporator in high degree we can make syrup from the juice. it is time for centrifuge in order to separate sugar crystals from syrup. in the last dab sugar in a special pot become dry and cool. as it's clear for making suger suger cane is necessary and we do not need other ingredients.
There are seven steps for manufacturing process for making
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sugar
from
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sugar
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cane
. After 12-18 months growing
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sugar
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cane
with hands or machine we should harvest them.
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obviously
harvesting by Hands is time-consuming.
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by
crushing this
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sugar
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cane
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juice
will
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make
however
it is not pure.
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for
purifying
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juice
we need
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timestone
filter.
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After
collecting
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juice
by an evaporator in high degree we can
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make
syrup from the
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juice
.
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it
is time for centrifuge in order to separate
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sugar
crystals from syrup.
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in
the last dab
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sugar
in a special pot become dry and cool.

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as
it's
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clear
for making
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suger suger
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cane
is
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necessary and
we do not need other ingredients.

IELTS essay How suger is produced from suger cane

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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