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How suger is produced from suger cane

How suger is produced from suger cane AamGM

There are seven steps for manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. After 12-18 months growing sugar cane with hands or machine we should harvest them. obviously harvesting by Hands is time-consuming. by crushing this sugar cane juice will make however it is not pure. for purifying juice we need timestone filter. After collecting juice by an evaporator in high degree we can make syrup from the juice. it is time for centrifuge in order to separate sugar crystals from syrup. in the last dab sugar in a special pot become dry and cool. as it's clear for making suger suger cane is necessary and we do not need other ingredients.

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. After 12-18 months growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
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cane
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obviously
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by
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sugar
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cane
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juice
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make
however
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for
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juice
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juice
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make
 syrup from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
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 is time for centrifuge in order to separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from syrup. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the last dab You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 in a special pot become dry and cool.

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as
 it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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suger suger
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cane
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necessary and
 we do not need other ingredients. 