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Using crewless cargo ships good or bad?

Using crewless cargo ships good or bad? AamOL

The author of the article and the lecture both discuss the international trades. Whereas the author of the article provides three advantages of utilizing crewless cargo ships instead of crewed vessels, the speaker casts doubt on the principal point by mentioning the disadvantages of using crewless ships. To begin with, utilizing crewless ships will reduce the cost required for voyages, since the cost for provision for crews like food, sleep quarters, entertainment, and so forth. However, the speaker claims that though companies employ the minimum crews for their ships, they at least need some crews to prevent the ships from malfunctioning. This circumstance can eventually cause more costs. On top of that, the author of the passage denotes that crewless ships are less to pirates, for there are no crews to ransome. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes that if companies utilize crewless ships, there are more risks due to hackers. They will annihilate the ships or even take the control of the ships, using high technology. Last but not least, according to the article, crewless ships will lessen the possibility of accidents. Generally, human errors bring about accidents; nonetheless, in case of an emergency situation, computers can react to it faster and avoid mistakes unlike humans. In contrast, the lecturer refutes the notion by mentioning that these large cargo ships usually go in one direction and encounter difficulties changing a course. Nevertheless, regular ships are controlled by people and are unpredictable. Unlike computers, people can predict it and avoid an accident occurring. !

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