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Why I've chosen AP physics

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During my high school years, I enrolled in an advanced placement class. Physics has been one of my favorite classes. I tend to gravitate towards theories rather than doing calculations and measurements. I would say that my passion and love for physics came from my high school physics teacher. His name is Mr. Severino. He is the person who hooked me into studying physics. He has a goofy and lively personality, and would frequently scare us with pop quizzes. When I first studied electrostatics, we had a group assignment about the Van de Graaff generator. I remembered feeling scared of getting myself electrocuted by the globe, and whenever I got close to the generator, I would shriek in fear. In the end, I realized that there were electrons particles inside the steel globe. I was fascinated. It has motivated me to learn and explore more theories and research various types of laws of physics. Not only that Mr. Severino is an excellent teacher, on the contrary also a motivator. Whenever I feel depressed or beaten from a low test score, Mr. Severino is always there to encourage me to do better.
During my high school years, I enrolled in an advanced placement
class
. Physics has been one of my favorite classes. I tend to gravitate towards theories
rather
than doing calculations and measurements. I would say that my passion and
love
for physics came from my high school physics teacher. His name is Mr.
Severino
. He is the person who hooked me into studying physics. He has a goofy and lively personality, and would
frequently
scare us with pop quizzes.

When I
first
studied electrostatics, we had a group assignment about the Van de Graaff generator. I remembered feeling scared of getting myself electrocuted by the globe, and whenever I
got
close to the generator, I would shriek in fear. In the
end
, I realized that there were electrons particles inside the steel globe. I
was fascinated
. It has motivated me to learn and explore more theories and research various types of laws of physics. Not
only
that Mr.
Severino
is an excellent teacher,
on the contrary
also
a motivator. Whenever I feel depressed or beaten from a low
test
score, Mr.
Severino
is always there to encourage me to do better.
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IELTS essay Why I've chosen AP physics

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