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In search of my “Identity” and the impact I can possibly create I started to do research, design aerospace technology and write articles about STEM. These action has not only left imprints locally but also globally, as Canadian space agency & DLR appreciated the work. It helped me grow by reaching out to people steps ahead of me on the same stair. Now I feel my identity “who I am? ”. I’m the one Who creates Impact, Who inspire others, Who contributes towards development of humanity through his skills in STEM & research and the one with his “Why? ”.
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