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o you think that people should retake their driving test every 5 years?

o you think that people should retake their driving test every 5 years? a88YG
Firstly, it must be recognized as one of the principal advantage is that there are lots new rules are introduced by the government and they all should be well-known for all people. Unfortunately, nowadays not every person knows where is the latest and strongly news or rule about the retaking the driving test every 5 years. In case, this environment would bring many hard accidents with humans. Moreover, if people pass the driving exam each 5 years, it would probably decrease the number of mishaps in our life. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of this. This means every 5 years more and more drivers retake their tests and take lots of licences. I mean that the main disadvantage would be offended of driver who paid a lot for government and has more interests for car tricks at streets, especially, young s. In conclusion, human’s characters and knowledges will play the main role in this way. However, it is more safety in multiplying numbers of retaking auto tests such as during a short of period and I strongly believe that it will decrease the numbers of many accidents.
Firstly
, it
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must
be recognized
as one of the principal advantage is that there are lots new
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rules
are introduced
by the
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government and
they all should be well-known for all
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people
. Unfortunately, nowadays not every person knows where is the latest and
strongly
news or
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rule
about the retaking the driving
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test
every 5 years. In case, this environment would bring
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many
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hard
accidents with humans.
Moreover
, if
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people
pass the driving exam each 5 years, it would
probably
decrease the number of mishaps in our life.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
disadvantages of this. This means every 5 years more and more drivers retake their
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tests
and take lots of
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licences
. I mean that the main disadvantage would
be offended
of driver who paid a lot for
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government
and has more
The usual collocation for "interests" is "in" not "for". Did you mean "interests in"?
interests for
car tricks at streets,
especially
, young s.

In conclusion
,
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human’s characters
and
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knowledges will
play the main role in this way.
However
, it is more safety in multiplying numbers of retaking auto
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
such as during a short of period and I
strongly
believe that it will decrease the numbers of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
accidents.
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IELTS essay o you think that people should retake their driving test every 5 years?

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190 words
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