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Why is it important to you, and what would your life be like without it?

Why is it important to you, and what would your life be like without it? LbKdR

For the person who 24 years old, it can't be fully understood what is the most important thing in the world. But, anyhow all of the individual person must found the what they want from the life. In other words, must found the life purpose. The 4 years ago I went to abroad for internship. I sent mails, made a agreements, prepared the papers all of them did just by myself and I went to good university at Finland in the summer term. It was a excellent experience for my carrier aim. I observed the lab systems, work styles and many of of it. Before I go, I've been thinking my carrier and what I want exactly. And after the internship I decided to study for master degree, researched many universities and teachers. Finally I'm master student now and preparing for PhD study in UK. It's my opinion, live for dreams the most essential thing in the world.

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 understood what is the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing in the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 individual person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 found the what they want from the life. In other words
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must
 found the life purpose.

The 4 years ago I There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "went abroad"?went abroad
went to abroad
 for internship. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 mails, made Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a agreement" or simply "agreements"?a agreementagreements
a agreements
, prepared the papers all of them did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 by myself and I went to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 university at Finland in the summer term. It was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 excellent experience for my carrier aim. I observed the lab systems, work styles and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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of of
 it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 I go, I've been thinking my carrier and what I want exactly. And after the internship I decided to study for master degree, researched This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 universities and teachers. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 I'm master student This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and preparing for PhD study in UK. It's my opinion, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 for dreams the most essential thing in the world. 