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vegetarian life style they give us healty life aldso

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everyone should become vagetarian beause we harm animals is very pittyfull first of all vagetarian prefer all contains nutritions which is required our body moreover it also protect our body to all types of health issues because the contain a lot of extra they could not suitable for our body the resukt is that we are suffer from high cholestrol suger etcetra. for example we eat daily chiken they high up over blood pressue because they carry much more energy our body not vapable to digest or store extra energy. pure vagetarian provodies much more benefities like they build up our immunity they produce our strength againstother virus of infections they lay down our body example a fruit is kiwi is prescribed by doctors to eat it when you have less white cells they give nutrition and progress is unblievable
everyone
should become
vagetarian
beause
we harm animals is
very
pittyfull
first of all
vagetarian
prefer all contains
nutritions
which
is required
our
body
moreover
it
also
protect
our
body
to all types of health issues
because
the contain
a lot of
extra they
could not suitable
for our
body
the
resukt
is that we are
suffer
from high
cholestrol
suger
etcetra
.
for
example we
eat daily
chiken
they high
up over blood
pressue
because
they carry much more energy our
body
not
vapable
to digest or store extra energy.
pure
vagetarian
provodies
much more
benefities
like they build up our immunity they produce our strength
againstother
virus of infections they lay down our
body
example a fruit is kiwi
is prescribed
by doctors to eat it when you have less white cells they give nutrition and progress is
unblievable
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IELTS essay vegetarian life style they give us healty life aldso

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