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Present your opinion about one TV show that you find it fasinating to watch

Present your opinion about one TV show that you find it fasinating to watch 8dr2G
I always watch TV when I have free time. There are many unforgettable TV shows that I have an interest in. One of them is “ Who is a millionaire? ”, which is broadcast every Tuesday at 8 pm on channel VTV3. In this show, each player has to answer 15 questions to get an amount of money up to 150 million VND. To help the players, producers will give them 4 assists to pass all the questions more easily. Each question relates to an amount of money. The higher question the players can reach, the more money they can obtain. This TV show requires the players to have a wide range of knowledge to pass as much as the question they can. Through watching this show, I can get more knowledge about almost every field, so that I really love it.
I always
watch
TV when I have free time. There are
many
unforgettable TV
shows
that I have an interest in. One of them is
Who is a millionaire? ”, which is broadcast every Tuesday at 8 pm on channel VTV3. In this
show
, each
player
has to
answer 15
questions
to
get
an amount of money up to 150 million VND. To
help
the
players
, producers will give them 4 assists to pass all the
questions
more
easily
. Each
question
relates to an amount of money. The higher
question
the
players
can reach, the more money they can obtain. This TV
show
requires the
players
to have a wide range of knowledge to pass as much as the
question
they can. Through watching this
show
, I can
get
more knowledge about almost every field,
so
that I
really
love
it.
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IELTS essay Present your opinion about one TV show that you find it fasinating to watch

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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