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Why is Facebook so popular?

Why is Facebook so popular? pLYo2
Social networks have become an integral part of our daily lives. One of the most popular social media networking sites in today’s time is Facebook. Facebook captures the users’ moment with its helpful options; especially, communication, entertainment, and sources of information are the main factors for Facebook’s popularity. Along with communicative advancement it carries out, Facebook is the ideal platform for relatives, friends, and family members to stay connected. When a friend or a relative goes away to another place, Facebook is the best tool to communicate with him or her by chatting or calling. We can find our old companions, ex-classmates, former teachers, college friends, and so on. Facebook is known to help people around the world connect, build more relationships, and thus make life more colorful. Furthermore, we are allowed to share our feelings and what is happening in our daily life. We can also get quick feedback from our friends. With only a single account, talking to others has never been more convenient. With entertaining advantages, Facebook brings joy to users with memes, videos, and other extensions. Entertainment on Facebook refers to the sharing of feelings. Having many likes and comments when you, by yourself, upload pictures, statuses, or videos makes you much happier and connect to the world. Surfing Facebook for hilarious contents, reading others’ sharings or watching videos you are interested in are the ways to help you relieve stress. As well as laughing at hilarious postings, seeing your favorite bloggers livestreaming on Facebook makes you feel delighted. Another form of entertainment is fitting in with the latest trends. Dramas are the best trends for people to catch up. Dramas, albeit negative, pique the users’ curiosity and make them stay around for the latest information revolving around dramas. All of the following elements are sources of entertainment for people to enjoy. Last but not least, what makes this social network unceasingly appealing and immersive is a source of information. Facebook is a vast source of information where users can read news and posts about the events that are happening all over the world. Moreover, they can express their viewpoints about the topic and initiate a discussion with others. People tend to get some of the most important news through Facebook such as fashion, medicine, education, business, and so on; therefore, it keeps everything up-to-date. Facebook is responsible for acquiring so much helpful information and knowledge on specific contents. Those contents, for example sports or politics, help users get hold of what is going on in the world. All of the above factors make it informative and purposeful. To sum up, Facebook is the most helpful platform with a lot of functions, especially in interaction, leisure activities, and source of news. Through Facebook, people can engage in a host of activities such as playing games, interacting with friends, chatting, video calling, and so on. It is an excellent medium of versatility with low cost and great advantages for the users. Word count: 494
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lives
. One of the most popular social media networking sites in
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today
’s time is Facebook. Facebook captures the
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users’
moment with its helpful options;
especially
, communication, entertainment, and
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sources
of
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information
are the main factors for Facebook’s popularity.

Along with communicative advancement it carries out, Facebook is the ideal platform for relatives,
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friends
, and family members to stay connected. When a
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friend
or a relative goes away to another place, Facebook is the best tool to communicate with him or her by chatting or calling. We can find our
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old
companions, ex-classmates, former teachers, college
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friends
, and
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so
on. Facebook
is known
to
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help
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people
around the
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world
connect, build more relationships, and
thus
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make
life more colorful.
Furthermore
, we are
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allowed
to share our feelings and what is happening in our daily life. We can
also
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get
quick feedback from our
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friends
. With
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only
a single account, talking to others has never been more convenient.

With entertaining advantages, Facebook brings joy to
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users
with memes,
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videos
, and
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other
extensions. Entertainment on Facebook refers to the sharing of feelings. Having
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many
likes and comments when you, by yourself, upload pictures, statuses, or
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videos
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makes
you much happier and connect to the
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world
. Surfing Facebook for hilarious contents, reading others’
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sharings
or watching
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videos
you
are interested
in are the ways to
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help
you relieve
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stress
.
As well
as laughing at hilarious postings, seeing your favorite bloggers livestreaming on Facebook
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makes
you feel delighted. Another form of entertainment is fitting in with the latest trends. Dramas are the best trends for
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people
to catch up. Dramas, albeit
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negative
, pique the
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users’
curiosity and
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make
them stay around for the latest
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information
revolving around dramas.
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All of the
following elements are
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sources
of entertainment for
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people
to enjoy.

Last
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but
not least, what
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makes
this social network
unceasingly
appealing and immersive is a
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source
of
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information
. Facebook is a vast
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source
of
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information
where
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users
can read news and posts about the
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events
that are happening all over the
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world
.
Moreover
, they can express their viewpoints about the topic and initiate a discussion with others.
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People
tend to
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get
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some
of the most
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important
news through Facebook such as fashion, medicine, education, business, and
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so
on;
therefore
, it
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keeps
everything up-to-date. Facebook is responsible for acquiring
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so
much helpful
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information
and knowledge on specific contents. Those contents,
for example
sports or politics,
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help
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users
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get
hold of what is going on in the
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world
.
Consider using "all the".
All of the
above factors
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make
it informative and purposeful.

To sum up, Facebook is the most helpful platform with
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a lot of
functions,
especially
in interaction, leisure activities, and
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source
of news. Through Facebook,
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people
can engage in a host of activities such as playing games, interacting with
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friends
, chatting,
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video
calling, and
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so
on. It is an excellent medium of versatility with low cost and great advantages for the users.

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IELTS essay Why is Facebook so popular?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
496 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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