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describe an experience where you ưwere late là

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One occasion that I was late for was not that long ago. What happened was that I had some important work to do, and there was a deadline on this work. At the time, in our house we need finances. Some unexpected things came up, and we were a little short. Then an opportunity came, almost like a godsend, a chance where I could make some extra money. On top of that, by the graciousness of my friends, who are more like my family, they agreed to help me with this project that had a deadline to it. So I was very happy about that. Meanwhile I started taking care of some business, but then I looked at my watch and noticed I was five minutes late for getting together with my friends. I thought, "here my friends are willing to help me with this project and deadline, and here I am, five minutes Late. "
One occasion that I was late for was not that long ago. What happened was that I had
some
important
work to do, and there was a deadline on this work. At the time, in our
house
we need finances.
Some
unexpected things came up, and we were a
little
short. Then an opportunity came, almost like a godsend, a chance where I could
make
some
extra money.
On top of that
, by the graciousness of my friends, who are more like my family, they
agreed
to
help
me with this project that had a deadline to it.
So
I was
very
happy about that.
Meanwhile
I
started
taking care of
some
business,
but
then I looked at my
watch
and noticed I was five minutes late for getting together with my friends. I
thought
,
"
here my friends are willing to
help
me with this project and deadline, and here I am, five minutes Late.
"
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IELTS essay describe an experience where you ưwere late là

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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