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why is doing sport vital for people?

why is doing sport vital for people? n1Ypo

Sport is very important to people. When you are doing sport your body getting stronger. Because your muscules are working. Sport not only important to our body but also it is vital to brain. When you out your brain trains too. Your memory gets stronger. Finally sport is good to heart diseases. People who are doing sport regularly they have a minimum percentage of having heart diseases. Especially who does a swimming, ride a bicycle, walks everyday as, who makes sport a routine of a day gets away from all diseases. As a result we should try to do sport every day for being healthy.

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 your body getting stronger. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 it is vital to brain. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 you out your brain trains too. Your memory This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
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sport
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 to heart diseases. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
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 they have a minimum percentage of having heart diseases. Especially
 who does a swimming, ride a bicycle, walks 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
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sport
 a routine of a day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
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 away from all diseases. As a result
 we should try to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
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 every day for being healthy. 