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why is learning a language necessary?

why is learning a language necessary? AJW7w
Learning language is necessary for everyone. Let’s count the reasons of this. At first, you want to study at foreign country and you know their own language. It is a big plus for you because this point necessary in selection stage. Second reason is you go to foreign country when you know their language it getting more easier to you. You can ask anything from the citizens. And you fell free and more confident when you know language where you are living or where you go for a holiday. At a result knowing other foreign languages is a advantage on everywhere and everything.
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this point necessary in selection stage. Second reason is you go to foreign country when you know their
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to you. You can ask anything from the citizens. And you fell free and more confident when you know
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language
where you are living or where you go for a holiday. At a result knowing other foreign
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languages
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advantage on everywhere and everything.

IELTS essay why is learning a language necessary?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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