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University should only allow equal number of male and female

University should only allow equal number of male and female RweXV

The education system should not be based on gender. I do not completely agree with the sentence that, the educational institutes should only allowed equal number of male and female candidate. To begin with, some courses are great advantage to the men in compare to women, while some demands more female candidates. There are some courses which are suitable for both the gender like business management. While courses like Marketing is best for men as it requires a lot of physical strength. To extend, it is stated that female candidate prefere medical study more then IT. Furthermore, institutes should not place a restrictions on the basis of genders in order to fill the classes. That being said, people are free to select the subject of their choices whitout gibing to worry about equallity in terms of seats. Moreover, the country with high number of male over female will be consider disadvantage for women lf the university admission system is based on equal gender classes. In conclusion, after the given views it can be stated that education system should be free from all the liabilities and courses should not be restricted on equal gender thinking.

The education system should not be based
 on gender. I do not completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the sentence that, the educational institutes should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 equal number of male and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 candidate.

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begin
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 are great advantage to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 in compare to women, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 demands more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 candidates. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 which are suitable for both the gender like business management. While You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
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like


Marketing is best for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 as it requires This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 physical strength. To extend, it is stated
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 candidate Possible spelling mistake found.preferprefersprewarprefabpref ereprefer e
prefere
 medical study more Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
then
 IT.

Furthermore
, institutes should not place Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a restriction" or simply "restrictions"?a restrictionrestrictions
a restrictions
 on the basis of genders in order to fill the classes. That being said
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are free to select the subject of their choices Possible spelling mistake found.whiteoutwhit out
whitout
 gibing to worry about Possible spelling mistake found.equality
equallity
 in terms of seats. Moreover
, the country with high number of male over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 will be Consider using the past participle "considered"?considered
consider
 disadvantage for women Possible spelling mistake found.ofifLAlbLtSF
lf
 the university admission system is based
 on equal gender classes.

In conclusion
, after the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 views it can be stated
 that education system should be free from all the liabilities and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
 should not be restricted
 on equal gender thinking. 