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Nowadays, there are many countries in the world which is totally depended on agriculture activities. Farming is taxes free in some counties while they collect taxes on imported food and in my point of view i am totally agree with them. It is necessary to collect taxes on out countries side food and items. To begin with, some people argue that laying taxes on food imports is not beneficial for consumers and humans who living in country. Firstly, they believe items can be available at cheaper rates but government can control their prices by collecting cheap duties upon them. Secondly, if they collect some money by taxes they can use it for helping poor people and they can give food free to mankind when they need. On the other hand, if governments are not collect duties on important food they should lost their extra income. There are many special food and spices which is grown in particular country so they export their food where it is needed. And also not laying assessments is not beneficial for country side farmers. Secondly, if farming is taxes free in a country so farmers can increase their income and also people get food in cheapest price. In some countries farmers play a good role in economy sector. In conclusion, every country has a right to protect their farmers. And also every country has a system to protect the local industry from the global competition.
Nowadays, there are
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depended on agriculture activities. Farming is
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taxes
free in
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some
counties while they
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on imported
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food
and in my point of view
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totally
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collect
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taxes
on out
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countries
side
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food
and items.

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some
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argue that laying
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taxes
on
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food
imports is not beneficial for consumers and humans who living in
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country
.
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, they believe items can be available at cheaper rates
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but
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government
can control their prices by collecting
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cheap
duties upon them.
Secondly
, if they
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collect
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some
money by
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taxes
they can
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use
it for helping poor
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people and
they can give
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food
free to mankind when they need.

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, if
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governments
are not
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collect
duties on
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important
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food
they should
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their extra income. There are
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special
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food
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country
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so
they export their
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food
where it
is needed
. And
also
not laying assessments is not beneficial for
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country
side
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farmers
.
Secondly
, if farming is
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taxes
free in a
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country
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so
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farmers
can increase their income and
also
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people
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get
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food
in
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cheapest
price. In
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countries
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farmers
play a
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good
role in economy sector.

In conclusion
, every
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country
has a right to protect their
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farmers
. And
also
every
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country
has a system to protect the local industry from the global competition.

IELTS essay farmers within a country

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
240 words
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