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why food important in our life?

why food important in our life? DwAL6
Food: Food is necessary for life, everybody need too food for surveying. Everything that be to eat, we can call Food but exactly able to eat not enough for being food. Food has a lot of material that useful for body like vitamin, calorie or energy that it provides body for doing activities. There is many kind of food, all of them are eaten but they don’t have same value. usually some of them are harmful and unhealthy for body so use them a lot can be dangerous, the scientists classify food to several parts and recognize that everyone should use how amount. Carbohydrate and grains, fats and oils, vegetables and fruits, proteins, meat and dairy are some of groups of food. Everybody needs to certain amount of kind of food because abuse or useless food can be injurious for healthy. so people should know their bodies needs then eat suitable mixing of food. In the other classifying people locate foods into tow group, one healthy or dietary food and fast food or junk food. Both of them procure calorie but first group is good for healthy but seconds is bad. so, way of cook is very important in food quality. Although food is necessary and important but choosing fail food can be dangerous for body, everyone should know its body needs and chooses best food and true quantity until be health and powerful, the people can’t understand their bodies needs truly, doctors and nutritionists help to people that keep their health.
Food:

Food is necessary for life, everybody
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need
too
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food
for surveying. Everything that be to eat, we can call
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Food
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but
exactly able to eat not
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enough
for being
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food
.
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Food
has
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a lot of
material that useful for
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body
like vitamin, calorie or energy that it provides
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body
for doing activities.

There is
Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".
many kind
of
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food
, all of them
are eaten
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but
they don’t have same
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value
.
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usually
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some
of them are harmful and unhealthy for
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body
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so
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use
them a lot can be
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dangerous
, the scientists classify
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food
to several parts and recognize that everyone should
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use
how amount. Carbohydrate and grains, fats and oils, vegetables and fruits, proteins, meat and dairy are
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some of groups
of
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food
. Everybody
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needs
to certain amount of kind of
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food
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because
abuse or useless
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food
can be injurious for healthy.
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so
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people
should know their
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bodies
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needs
then eat suitable mixing of food.

In the other classifying
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people
locate
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foods
into tow group, one healthy or dietary
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food
and
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fast
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food
or junk
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food
. Both of them procure calorie
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but
first
group is
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good
for healthy
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but
seconds is
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bad
.
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so
, way of cook is
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very
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important
in
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food
quality.

Although
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food
is necessary and
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important
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but
choosing fail
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food
can be
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dangerous
for
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body
, everyone should know its
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body
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needs
and
A determiner is probably missing here: "chooses the best".
chooses best
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food
and true quantity until be health and powerful, the
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people
can’t understand their
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bodies
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needs
truly
, doctors and nutritionists
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help
to
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people
that
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keep
their health.
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IELTS essay why food important in our life?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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