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Classify the pros and cons of death penalty

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In the current society, crime becomes one of the most urgent issues of every society to deal with since the types costs and effects are widely varried. Therefore, some prevention are acted as a deterrent and the most serious strategy is dealth penalty which is taken into a consideration while some people argue that capital punishment should not be carried out, the others want to use for the most critical crimes. From my perspective, I believe that each individual need to be given a chance of rehabilitation. On the one hand, the idea that rejecting the death penalty is attractive for some reasons. First of all, criminal punishment can be affected by the economy between walks of life. To be more specific, wealthy people are likely to use their financial advantage to ease their crime. In some cases, political priority is intervened so that the impartiality is vanished for the inhabitants. Another reason is that death penalty is quite inhumane and there are some alternatives to be used such as corporal punishment or a prison sentence. By those measures, the criminal can regret themselves and embark on a new life. On the other hand, there are a variety of reason why capital punishment should be the only treatment for the most serious crime. Firstly, heinous crime can be controlled due to the fear of death which is one of the most prominent frights of everyone. For that reason, the criminal rate can be lessened and this treatment can ensure the safety and gain the trust of the inhabitants since the citizens can aware of their protection from the government and believe more in the rights. In addition, there will be no chance of escape when there are still so many criminals who escape from the jails and commit even worse crimes. Therefore, the death sentence is the best way to get rid of the bad situation. In conclusion, although both views are justifiable to some extent, I would argue that capital punishment should be rejected as no one is born criminal and people need to be educated and explained the repercussions rather than killing them.
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society,
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crime
becomes one of the most urgent issues of every society to deal with since the types costs and effects are
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varried
.
Therefore
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some
prevention
are acted
as a deterrent and the most serious strategy is
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dealth
penalty which
is taken
into a consideration while
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some
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people
argue that capital
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punishment
should not
be carried
out, the others want to
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use
for the most critical
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crimes
. From my perspective, I believe that each individual need to be
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given
a chance of rehabilitation.

On the one hand, the
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idea
that rejecting the death penalty is attractive for
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some
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reasons
.
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First of all
,
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criminal
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punishment
can be
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affected
by the economy between walks of life. To be more specific, wealthy
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people
are likely to
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use
their financial advantage to
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ease
their
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crime
. In
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some
cases, political priority
is intervened
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so
that the impartiality
is vanished
for the inhabitants. Another
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reason
is that death penalty is quite inhumane and there are
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some
alternatives to be
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used
such as corporal
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punishment
or a prison sentence. By those measures, the
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criminal
can regret themselves and embark on a new life.

On the other hand
, there are a variety of
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reason
why capital
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punishment
should be the
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only
treatment for the most serious
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crime
.
Firstly
, heinous
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crime
can
be controlled
due to the fear of death which is one of the most prominent frights of everyone. For that
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reason
, the
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criminal
rate can
be lessened
and this treatment can ensure the safety and gain the trust of the inhabitants since the citizens can aware of their protection from the
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government
and believe more in the rights.
In addition
, there will be no chance of escape when there are
still
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so
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many
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criminals
who escape from the jails and commit even worse
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crimes
.
Therefore
, the death sentence is the best way to
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get
rid of the
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bad
situation.

In conclusion
, although both views are justifiable to
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some
extent, I would argue that capital
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punishment
should
be rejected
as no one
is born
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criminal
and
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people
need to
be educated
and
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explained
the repercussions
rather
than killing them.
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IELTS essay Classify the pros and cons of death penalty

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