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Why eye-contact is important in Communication

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The eyes play an important role in nonverbal communication and such things as looking, staring and blinking are important nonverbal behaviors. People also utilize eye gaze as a means to determine if someone thinking. Examples, because of different cultures: In Asia (including Middle East), keeping eye contact with someone of authority implies rudeness and can be mistaken as a provoking mean of communication. In Western societies, eye contact can imply empathy and comes across as a type of emotional connection. And religious differences: In extremist religions, eye contact is sometimes frowned upon amongst people of the opposite sex. Muslim women lower their gaze when in the presence of men.
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IELTS essay Why eye-contact is important in Communication

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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