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In this day and age , schooling is essential to gain knowledge and develop . Most familes choose a private tutor for their children to help them more and more better

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In this day and age, schooling is essential to gain knowledge and develop. Most familes choose a private tutor for their children to help them more and more better. I totally agreed due to that seems to be a completely possitive development. On the one hand, Learning to pair up in a separate space is really good for a child. By while being supervised with instructions 1 with 1, Children will have the most comfortable space to focus on studying that is not available in school. The advice and support they provide can help overcome weaknesses in a student's knowledge in a more dedicated way. For example, An essay can hardly be solved smoothly because of creativity as well as writing style thanks to the comfort in learning that private space brings. Therefore, the child's learning results are indirectly increased. On the other hand, Tuition fees when studying with a tutor are often higher than studying in classes. Many families with difficult circumstances cannot afford it. Regarding extroverted kids, tutoring can sometimes make them feel constrained and uncomfortable. For instance, They prefer a healthy and active learning style because it will create a spirit and interest in learning. As a result, They can help and give advice to each other as they learn and develop together. To sum up, Hiring a private tutor brings many positive effects in learning for children. However, It is not necessary for some people, it depends on the preferences, needs or finances of each family.

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