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Write a story about something that happened to you

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There are numerous things that happened in the past that I will never forget, but today I am going to write about a difficult decision I made. When I was preparing the application form for the university admission exam, I had to make a critical decision, which was not simple to make. At that time, I was at a crossroads, where I had to decide which university to apply for. Actually, I was interested in the University of Economics and Finance but my parents wanted me to study at Ho Chi Minh City University of Law. I nevertheless followed my parents of advice until the day I submitted my application, choosing the University of Law as the first option and the University of Economics and Finance as the second. I was not really like that. When I got my national exams result, I knew that I would have to study law. Fortunately, my mother knew I did not like it, so she let me transfer to the college I wanted first, but with the caveat that "you are responsible for what you pick, what I arrange is simply I want the best for you. " All in all, I studied in my favorite university but I am also sad that I did not do what my parents wanted. However, I will do my best to demonstrate that I made the correct decision
There are numerous things that happened in the past that I will never forget,
but
today
I am going to write about a difficult decision I made.

When I was preparing the application form for the
university
admission exam, I had to
make
a critical decision, which was not simple to
make
. At that time, I was at a crossroads, where I had to decide which
university
to apply for. Actually, I
was interested
in the
University
of Economics and Finance
but
my parents wanted me to study at Ho Chi Minh City
University
of Law. I
nevertheless
followed my parents of advice until the day I submitted my application, choosing the
University
of Law as the
first
option and the
University
of Economics and Finance as the second. I was not
really
like that. When I
got
my national exams result, I knew that I would
have to
study law.
Fortunately
, my mother knew I did not like it,
so
she
let
me transfer to the college I wanted
first
,
but
with the caveat that
"
you are responsible for what you pick, what I arrange is
simply
I want the best for you.
"


All in all, I studied in my favorite
university
but
I am
also
sad that I did not do what my parents wanted.
However
, I will do my best to demonstrate that I made the correct decision
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IELTS essay Write a story about something that happened to you

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
231 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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