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Why do you want to be a member of our club?

Why do you want to be a member of our club? lXb5X

I want to join this organization because being a member of 7SEC and specifically the media board is really interesting and challenging. I see this opportunity as a way to contribute to exciting university life, and I can gain a lot of experience, knowledge and skills which will follow me many years later thanks to this community. I had 2 years of experience working in the Physics club at Phu Nhuan Highschool and I am sure that the skills that I have acquired from my past experience will help me create a bit of value for this club.

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join
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because
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 the media board is The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".fascinatingexciting
really interesting
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see
 this opportunity as a way to contribute to exciting university life, and I can gain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 experience, knowledge and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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many
 years later thanks to this community. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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past experience
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help
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