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Incarceration rate of the USA

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The United States right now has one of the highest incarceration rates in the world, not just compared to other countries and regions such as the European Union, but even compared to the US historically (Raphael, 2009). This essay will examine the growth of the US’s prison population that started in the 1970s (Raphael, 2009) and will argue that it is not due to an increase in crime in the US, but rather due to a history of tough-on-crime policies. This essay will also examine the issues, manly racial, that surround a high incarceration rate. Raphael in his article defines three broad factors that have an effect on incarceration rates, the first being the crime rate in the given country (Raphael, 2009). This might be considered the most basic explanation for why the US has a higher incarceration rate than other countries, as people would expect the two to correlate, but this essay will show that a high crime rate is not the reason for the high incarceration rate. First US crime rates are similar to those of other developed countries, only gun violence stands out, as it is more commonplace in the US than in other parts of the world (Tonry, 1999) However, although gun violence is an important issue it is not the explanation to the question of this essay, as less than 25% of people sent to prison are sentenced because of violent crimes (Tonry, 1999). Even when considering the fact that incarceration rates in the US compared to crime rates are higher than in other countries, one could still argue that the rise of the prison population is due to a similar rise in crime. Certainly, there is a bit of validity to this claim as crime rates did increase in this time (Tonry, 1999), but that does not show the full picture as to when comparing the US to countries such as Finland or Germany, where crime rates increased in a similar matter but incarceration rates decreased unlike in the US (Tonry, 1999) Thus imprisonment rates did not just simply increase because crime increased, rather “they rose because American politicians wanted them to rise (Tonry, 1999 p. 422). Raphael’s two other factors are the likelihood of being sent to prison conditional of committing a crime, and the length of sentences (Raphael, 2009). The first of these two being in close correlation with crime rates, increased as well, especially when looking at drug offenses (Raphael, 2009). The length of sentences increased as well for most crimes, and this closely correlates with public policy decisions at the time (Raphael, 2009). Raphael also underlines the argument made by Tonry that “increases in crime cannot explain a substantial portion of incarceration growth” (Raphael, 2009, pp 91), rather policy changes and changes in sentencing can (Raphael, 2009). Even though this essay pointed to an increase in crime rates in the second part of the 20th century, that is also not the full picture. The reason is that the rates of many types of crime, such as murder, rape, robbery, and property decreased between the 1980 and the early 2000s, but drug-related crime rates, in contrast, increased (Raphael, 2009). Looking at this time frame however, we can see that the crime rates did fluctuate, with for example murder and robbery seeing an increase around 1990, then going down once again (Blumstein 1998). However, in general, we can say that the crime rates stayed roughly stable around this time, while incarceration rates more than quadrupled, with the biggest increase in drug-related incarceration (Blumstein, 1998). In the 1970s US President Nixon declared illegal drugs as public enemy number one and started the war on drugs (Alexander, 2010). This era was then characterized by major media campaigns presenting drugs and drug users as dangers to society (Alexander, 2010). Politicians called and worked for hard sentencing laws, and actively vilified drug users. (Alexander, 2010). These policies led to a major increase in drug-related arrests, an increased risk of imprisonment upon arrest and longer sentences (Pettit and Western, 2004). These policies led to a major increase in federal prison populations (Pettit and Western, 2004). Another similar “war” was also started around this time, the war on crime, which reflected a shift away from a rehabilitative philosophy of corrections to one of “crime prevention through the incapacitation of troublesome populations” (Pettit and Western, 2004, p. 154). This already points to an important part of this issue, of marginalized minorities, an issue that will be examined further in a later paragraph. Tonry writes about five possible reasons for the high incarceration rate of the US, the first being higher crime rates and crime trends, which this essay already examined (Tonry, 1999). The next two, public opinion and partisan politics in the US (Tonry, 1999), could very well explain the political trends of the war on drugs and the war on crime, which started in the 70s. Public opinion does reflect the idea of being harsh on crime and drugs, and surveys usually find people regarding crime and drugs as central problems, and people usually feel that sentencing is too lenient and that punishment must be tougher (Tonry, 1999). From this perspective, one could simply argue that public officials have merely respected this will (Tonry, 1999). But this would miss the point that people usually believe sentences to be much softer than they are, and they believe that crime rates are rising when in fact they are falling (Tonry, 1999). This is important as it shows that many politicians tough on crime are simply claiming they are following the public’s will, when in fact this will, and concern is only created by the media’s and politicians' focus on crime. Now, this essay will take a closer look at the focus of politicians on crime and partisan politics. Crime came first on to the American political agendas when Republican candidate Barry Goldwater raised it as a partisan issue in his unsuccessful 1964 presidential campaign (Tonry, 1999). Before this time crime and criminal justice policy were left mainly to practitioners and technocrats, but as it became more of a political issue, criminal policy started to be influenced more by rhetoric than substance (Tonry, 1999). During the Nixon and Reagan era, Republican strategists focused on mainly three wedge issues of welfare, crime, and affirmative action (Tonry, 1999). However, with the politicization of this issue, the problem became that the issue of crime and substance abused was simplified and used as a political tool, and this all led to the adoption of “ham-fisted and poorly considered policies” (Tonry, 1999, p. 427), such as broadly written mandatory sentencing laws, three-strikes laws, or federal sentencing guidelines (Tonry, 1999). The issue with this political discourse was as well that with these sorts of sound bite politics where one side represented being against crime and the other being for crime made it difficult for politicians to fight against these ideas (Tonry, 1999). It would be also a mistake not to look at the impact of race and racism on the incarceration rate of the US, as minority groups such as black Americans tend to be overrepresented in the prison system (Alexander, 2010). Michelle Alexander writes in her book about mass incarceration being in the US a new way for the government to control African Americans (Alexander, 2010). She argues that the institutions used to control black Americans like slavery did not die rather they transformed to better but still bad institutions, such as the Jim Crow laws and segregation, which ended up transforming into mass incarceration, which she calls the New Jim Crow (Alexander, 2010). The idea that criminal and drug policy was influenced by race and racism is further enforced by John Ehrlichman who was President Nixon’s domestic policy chief, and who reportedly admitted in 1994 that they were lying about the drugs during the start of the war on drugs, and that their main reasoning was to associate hippies and black people with drugs so that they could vilify and arrest them (Lopez, 2016). The failure of the war on drugs is further represented by the fact that although the harshest federal drug laws were only enacted by 1986 and 1988, drug use was on a steady decline since 1980, meaning if the true goal of the war on drugs was to lower the usage of drugs than “the war was being won a decade before it was declared” (Tonry 1999, p. 432). In the United States, young black men are now more likely to go to prison than to college in their lifetime (Alexander, 2010). High incarceration rates in black neighborhoods pose a further problem, as the effect of harsh sentences and laws have a differing amount of deterrence on different communities (Blumstein, 1998). In middle class neighborhoods, these laws certainly do have a great power of deterrence, but in communities with high incarceration rates, where people have not been properly socialized against crime, such as in high crime black neighborhoods, these sentences can be counterproductive in deterrence (Blumstein, 1998). The stigma ex-prisoners face is an important factor as well and is sometimes called the period of invisible punishment (Alexander, 2010). This stigma keeps convicted offenders from ever truly integrating into mainstream society, and many offenders do end up back in prison, as a result, captured in a “circuit of perpetual marginality” (Alexander, 2010, p. 181). These would lead to the conclusion of a sort of snowball effect in high crime communities such as many black communities, where high incarceration rates following the war on drugs only ever led to it being even higher. To sum up, this essay has narrowed down the beginning of the unusually high incarceration rate in the US to the 1970s and the beginning of the war on drugs. It has argued that the high number of prisoners compared to other countries is not due to higher crime rates. Rather it is due to decades of public policy decisions, that shared the aim of being harsh on crime and drugs, if not necessarily for the benefit of the communities most affected rather for political and racial reasons. This essay pointed out as well how black communities were disproportionately affected by these policies and shined a light on some of the adverse effects this has had on the communities in question. In conclusion, the damage of high incarceration rates seem evident, and the failure of the war on drugs seems clear as well, so the United States has to have a good look on these policies and discourse needs to be had, to determine if these policies and attitudes are truly the right way forward.
The United States right
now
has one of the highest
incarceration
rates
in the world, not
just
compared to
other
countries
and regions such as the European Union,
but
even compared to the US
historically
(Raphael, 2009). This
essay
will examine the growth of the US’s
prison
population
that
started
in the 1970s (Raphael, 2009) and will
argue
that it is not
due
to an
increase
in
crime
in the US,
but
rather
due
to a history of tough-on-crime
policies
. This
essay
will
also
examine the
issues
,
manly
racial, that surround a
high
incarceration
rate.

Raphael in his article defines three broad factors that have an
effect
on
incarceration
rates
, the
first
being the
crime
rate
in the
given
country
(Raphael, 2009). This might
be considered
the most basic explanation for why the US has a higher
incarceration
rate
than
other
countries
, as
people
would
expect
the two to correlate,
but
this
essay
will
show
that a
high
crime
rate
is not the
reason
for the
high
incarceration
rate
.
First
US
crime
rates
are
similar
to those of
other
developed
countries
,
only
gun violence stands out, as it is more commonplace in the US than in
other
parts of the world (
Tonry
, 1999)
However
, although gun violence is an
important
issue
it is not the explanation to the question of this
essay
, as less than 25% of
people
sent
to
prison
are sentenced
because
of violent
crimes
(
Tonry
, 1999). Even when considering the
fact
that
incarceration
rates
in the US compared to
crime
rates
are higher than in
other
countries
, one could
still
argue
that the rise of the
prison
population
is
due
to a
similar
rise in
crime
.
Certainly
, there is a bit of validity to this claim as
crime
rates
did
increase
in this
time
(
Tonry
, 1999),
but
that does not
show
the full picture as to when comparing the US to
countries
such as Finland or Germany, where
crime
rates
increased
in a
similar
matter
but
incarceration
rates
decreased unlike in the US (
Tonry
, 1999)
Thus
imprisonment
rates
did not
just
simply
increase
because
crime
increased
,
rather
“they rose
because
American
politicians
wanted them to rise (
Tonry
, 1999 p. 422).

Raphael’s two
other
factors are the likelihood of being
sent
to
prison
conditional of committing a
crime
, and the length of
sentences
(Raphael, 2009). The
first
of these two being in close correlation with
crime
rates
,
increased
as
well
,
especially
when looking at
drug
offenses (Raphael, 2009). The length of
sentences
increased
as
well
for most
crimes
, and this
closely
correlates with
public
policy
decisions at the
time
(Raphael, 2009). Raphael
also
underlines the argument made by
Tonry
that
“increases
in
crime
cannot
explain
a
substantial


portion
of
incarceration
growth” (Raphael, 2009, pp 91),
rather
policy
changes
and
changes
in
sentencing
can (Raphael, 2009).

Even though
this
essay
pointed to an
increase
in
crime
rates
in the second part of the 20th century,
that is
also
not the full picture. The
reason
is that the
rates
of
many
types of
crime
, such as murder, rape, robbery, and property decreased between the 1980 and the early 2000s,
but
drug-related
crime
rates
,
in contrast
,
increased
(Raphael, 2009). Looking at this
time
frame
however
, we can
see
that the
crime
rates
did fluctuate, with
for example
murder and robbery seeing an
increase
around 1990, then going down once again (
Blumstein
1998).
However
,
in general
, we can say that the
crime
rates
stayed roughly stable around this
time
, while
incarceration
rates
more than quadrupled, with the biggest
increase
in drug-related
incarceration
(
Blumstein
, 1998).

In the 1970s US President Nixon declared illegal
drugs
as
public
enemy number one and
started
the
war
on
drugs
(Alexander, 2010). This era was then characterized by major media campaigns presenting
drugs
and
drug
users as
dangers
to society (Alexander, 2010).
Politicians
called and worked for
hard
sentencing
laws
, and
actively
vilified
drug
users. (Alexander, 2010). These
policies
led
to a major
increase
in drug-related arrests, an
increased
risk
of imprisonment upon arrest and longer
sentences
(
Pettit
and Western, 2004). These
policies
led
to a major
increase
in federal
prison
populations
(
Pettit
and Western, 2004). Another
similar
“war”
was
also
started
around this
time
, the
war
on
crime
, which reflected a shift away from a rehabilitative philosophy of corrections to one of
“crime
prevention through the incapacitation of troublesome
populations”
(
Pettit
and Western, 2004, p. 154). This already points to an
important
part of this
issue
, of marginalized minorities, an
issue
that will
be examined
further
in a later paragraph.

Tonry
writes about five possible
reasons
for the
high
incarceration
rate
of the US, the
first
being higher
crime
rates
and
crime
trends, which this
essay
already examined (
Tonry
, 1999). The
next
two,
public
opinion and partisan politics in the US (
Tonry
, 1999), could
very
well
explain
the political trends of the
war
on
drugs
and the
war
on
crime
, which
started
in the 70s.
Public
opinion does reflect the
idea
of being harsh on
crime
and
drugs
, and surveys
usually
find
people
regarding
crime
and
drugs
as central problems, and
people
usually
feel that
sentencing
is too lenient and that punishment
must
be tougher (
Tonry
, 1999). From this perspective, one could
simply
argue
that
public
officials have
merely
respected this will (
Tonry
, 1999).
But
this would miss the point that
people
usually
believe
sentences
to be much softer than they are, and they believe that
crime
rates
are rising when in
fact
they are falling (
Tonry
,

1999). This is
important
as it
shows
that
many
politicians
tough on
crime
are
simply
claiming they are following the
public’s
will, when in
fact
this will, and concern is
only
created by the media’s and politicians' focus on crime.

Now
, this
essay
will take a closer look at the focus of
politicians
on
crime
and partisan politics.
Crime
came
first
on to the American political agendas when Republican candidate Barry Goldwater raised it as a partisan
issue
in his unsuccessful 1964 presidential campaign (
Tonry
, 1999).
Before
this
time
crime
and criminal justice
policy
were
left
mainly
to practitioners and technocrats,
but
as it became more of a political
issue
, criminal
policy
started
to
be influenced
more by rhetoric than substance (
Tonry
, 1999). During the Nixon and Reagan era, Republican strategists focused on
mainly
three wedge
issues
of welfare,
crime
, and affirmative action (
Tonry
, 1999).
However
, with the politicization of this
issue
, the problem became that the
issue
of
crime
and substance abused
was simplified
and
used
as a political tool, and this all
led
to the adoption of “
ham-fisted
and
poorly
considered
policies”
(
Tonry
, 1999, p. 427), such as
broadly
written mandatory
sentencing
laws
, three-strikes
laws
, or federal
sentencing
guidelines (
Tonry
, 1999). The
issue
with this political discourse was as
well
that with these sorts of sound bite politics where one side represented being against
crime
and the
other
being for
crime
made it difficult for
politicians
to fight against these
ideas
(
Tonry
, 1999).

It would be
also
a mistake not to look at the impact of race and racism on the
incarceration
rate
of the US, as minority groups such as black Americans tend to
be overrepresented
in the
prison
system (Alexander, 2010). Michelle Alexander writes in her book about mass
incarceration
being in the US a new way for the
government
to control African Americans (Alexander, 2010). She
argues
that the institutions
used
to control black Americans like slavery did not
die
rather
they transformed to better
but
still
bad
institutions, such as the Jim Crow
laws
and segregation, which ended up transforming into mass
incarceration
, which she calls the New
Jim Crow
(Alexander, 2010). The
idea
that criminal and
drug
policy
was influenced
by race and racism is
further
enforced by John
Ehrlichman
who was President Nixon’s domestic
policy
chief, and who reportedly admitted in 1994 that they were lying about the
drugs
during the
start
of the
war
on
drugs
, and that their main reasoning was to associate hippies and black
people
with
drugs
so
that they could vilify and arrest them (Lopez, 2016). The failure of the
war
on
drugs
is
further
represented by the
fact
that although the harshest federal
drug
laws
were
only
enacted by 1986 and 1988,
drug
use
was on a steady decline since 1980, meaning if the true goal of the
war
on
drugs
was to lower the usage of
drugs
than “the
war
was
being won
a decade
before
it
was declared
” (
Tonry
1999, p. 432).

In the United States, young black
men
are
now
more likely to go to
prison
than to college in their lifetime (Alexander, 2010).
High
incarceration
rates
in black neighborhoods pose a
further
problem, as the
effect
of harsh
sentences
and
laws
have a differing amount of deterrence on
different
communities
(
Blumstein
, 1998). In middle
class
neighborhoods, these
laws
certainly
do have a great power of deterrence,
but
in
communities
with
high
incarceration
rates
, where
people
have not been
properly
socialized against
crime
, such as in
high
crime
black neighborhoods, these
sentences
can be counterproductive in deterrence (
Blumstein
, 1998). The stigma ex-prisoners face is an
important
factor as
well
and is
sometimes
called the period of invisible punishment (Alexander, 2010). This stigma
keeps
convicted offenders from ever
truly
integrating into mainstream society, and
many
offenders do
end
up back in
prison
,
as a result
, captured in a “circuit of perpetual
marginality
” (Alexander, 2010, p. 181). These would lead to the conclusion of a sort of snowball
effect
in
high
crime
communities
such as
many
black
communities
, where
high
incarceration
rates
following the
war
on
drugs
only
ever
led
to it being even higher.

To sum up, this
essay
has narrowed down the beginning of the
unusually
high
incarceration
rate
in the US to the 1970s and the beginning of the
war
on
drugs
. It has argued that the
high
number of prisoners compared to
other
countries
is not
due
to higher
crime
rates
.
Rather
it is
due
to decades of
public
policy
decisions, that shared the aim of being harsh on
crime
and
drugs
, if not
necessarily
for the benefit of the
communities
most
affected
rather
for political and racial
reasons
. This
essay
pointed out as
well
how black
communities
were
disproportionately
affected
by these
policies
and shined a light on
some of the
adverse effects this has had on the
communities
in question.
In conclusion
, the
damage of
high
incarceration
rates
seem evident, and the failure of the
war
on
drugs
seems
clear
as
well
,
so
the United States
has to
have a
good
look on these
policies
and discourse needs to
be had
, to determine if these
policies
and attitudes are
truly
the right way forward.
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