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killing you at the beach Desire to gain experience in a dynamic professional environment opportunity for success at work, learn more experience, hone skills. Working in a hotel with a creative and challenging working environment to develop yourself.

killing you at the beach Desire to gain experience in a dynamic professional environment opportunity for success at work, learn more experience, hone skills. Working in a hotel with a creative and challenging working environment to develop yourself. Mq9n6
Desire to gain experience in a dynamic professional environment opportunity for success at work, learn more experience, hone skills. Working in a hotel with a creative and challenging working environment to develop yourself. - Languages: Vietnamese (Native), English (Fluent). - Proficient in using computers. - Able to work under pressure. - Ability to connect people together. - Culture: proficient in American-Vietnamese
Desire to gain experience in a dynamic professional environment opportunity for success at work, learn more experience, hone
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Working in a hotel with a creative and challenging working environment to develop yourself.
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Languages: Vietnamese (Native), English (Fluent).

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
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Proficient in using computers.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
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Able to work under pressure.

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Ability to connect
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
together.

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Culture: proficient in American-Vietnamese
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IELTS essay killing you at the beach Desire to gain experience in a dynamic professional environment opportunity for success at work, learn more experience, hone skills. Working in a hotel with a creative and challenging working environment to develop yourself.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
60 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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