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Why do you want to attend Samarkand-USA English Camp-2021?

Why do you want to attend Samarkand-USA English Camp-2021? QL3EP

Because this camp has lots of advantages over other camps. Firstly, this camp is absolutely free and there I can both read and relax. I enjoy English and this program offers an opportunity for me to study it more in depth. And I would like the opportunity to meet and network with other students who are as passionate about as I am. Secondly, i really want to get better at art and this program will provide me with intensive practice. For these reasons, I want to participate in Samarkand- USA English Camp-2021

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