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At school, I have been a resident assistant for 2 years. As a resident assistant I am responsible for the care and co-management of a building of more than students. I gain valuable skills planning events, being the leader of a floor, and working as a team to effectively manage resident issues. I develop a lot of those same skills in student government. Last month our governing board managed events for our senior class of 100 students. I took a leadership role in event planning for our school dances and seasonal events, all of which had about an 75% attendance rate.

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. Last month our governing board managed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
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, all of which had about an 75% attendance rate. 